Normally I don't touch songfic, but this one was just great. And CJ's letter was just fracking hilarious. Aw Josh and Donna. Tee hee!

Nicely done. As someone who went back to an ex who was bad for her several times before catching on, this really clicked. I also liked the fun details and cute perspectives you added in here. Good work

I love it, again ppl keep giving me funny looks cos I'm laughing outloud in a public place. I'm not insane, I just love these stories. MORE MORE MORE!

I like that. Bagels are good. And Donna and Josh should be together forever. Ta, Corinne

Nice story! I liked it a lot! Please keep up on the Operatin Moss series!

Great story and the ending was so perfect! Am also really enjoying Operation Moss - keep writing!