|Reviews for In the Field|
| Delusional Illusionist 5/30/08 . chapter 1
This was good. It flowed together really well.
| Lover of Angelus 2/8/07 . chapter 1
Nice. Good flow.
| Darlian 11/23/06 . chapter 1
"I am alone." His voice had a desperate sound.
Another slap. Harder. The man was on hands and knees now, his face inches from the officer's boots.
Amazing. I loved how you never name the characters, and how you tell the story from the other side's point-of-view. Powerful ending.
Keep up the superb writing.
| L J Groundwater 8/19/06 . chapter 1
"Who needs courage if he is not afraid?"
A perfectly worded question that sums up heroism quite well.
I am impressed.
I sense English is not your first language, but I'm not sure? You've done a fine job with this piece.