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| Delusional Illusionist 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis was good. It flowed together really well. |
| Lover of Angelus 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseNice. Good flow. |
| Darlian 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuse"I am alone." His voice had a desperate sound. Another slap. Harder. The man was on hands and knees now, his face inches from the officer's boots. Amazing. I loved how you never name the characters, and how you tell the story from the other side's point-of-view. Powerful ending. Keep up the superb writing. |
| L J Groundwater 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuse"Who needs courage if he is not afraid?" A perfectly worded question that sums up heroism quite well. I am impressed. I sense English is not your first language, but I'm not sure? You've done a fine job with this piece. Regards |