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Delusional Illusionist
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseThis was good. It flowed together really well.
Lover of Angelus
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseNice. Good flow.
Darlian
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuse"I am alone." His voice had a desperate sound.

Another slap. Harder. The man was on hands and knees now, his face inches from the officer's boots.

Amazing. I loved how you never name the characters, and how you tell the story from the other side's point-of-view. Powerful ending.

Keep up the superb writing.
L J Groundwater
2006-08-19
ch 1,
abuse"Who needs courage if he is not afraid?"
A perfectly worded question that sums up heroism quite well.
I am impressed.
I sense English is not your first language, but I'm not sure? You've done a fine job with this piece.
Regards
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