Awe! This is by far one of my favourite stories! I love your writing, its really really good! James and Lily are so cute! Please, please keep writing! Looking forward to reading more! W.R.I.T.E.

It's been an awfully long time since you updated this fic, but im still holding on that maybe youll continue it once again! Please do, its a great fic!

i read this story coz it was recomended to me..
its good, but i have to impress upon you the need of editors.
they're great. they fix gramatical/spelling errors, correct little mistakes etc.
maybe you should look into it?

yay, plz continue.

Please continue! So good!

This captured Lily so well. It's always nice to see Lily painted in a different light.

What was most amusing about this chapter was her reaction of mortification. It's such a Lily reaction that I was chuckling.

Also good characterization of James, as well.

Great chapter

Just an FYI for your stories:

Lily Luna P. is Lily II (Harry & Ginny's daughter)
Lily Evans P. is Lily I (married to James Potter I and Harry's mother)

Your story (and the other 3 in your profile) incorrectly has Lily Luna Potter there instead of Lily Evans Potter.

You will probably get more hits, readers, and reviews if you have the correct character listed!

Lovely!

considering you haven't updated since December 06, i guess you have abandoned this story. But I loved it and I highly encourage you to finish it :)

You stopped there? Really? If you weren't such a fabulous writer, I'd call you a horrible person for ending there!

Simply lovely. Dialogue seems quite natural.

loved it so far!
please continuuee!!
i want to know what happens and how do they end up together!


hope u keep the story up!
i noticed u have not updated in a long time!

please!!

kisses!

this is really good.
please continue and update soon :D

please tell me that's not the end
it seems you haven't updated for two years
no no!
but if thats the end, then bravo!
i loved it
pretty good at following the books
and characterisation was spot on!

Great story..I'm so glad she got rid of Richard!!
I kno that its been ages since you updated bt plz try to Update soon!
Good job!~