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| HellsAlchemist 2007-07-11 ch 43,  | abuseAnother great chapter. Please continue. |
| HellsAlchemist 2007-07-04 ch 42, | abuseThese drabbles were all very well written, and very dramatic. I enjoyed all of them. though the short chapters were a bit annoying at first, there meaning was great and made up for it. How you wrote Knives' emotion was great, truly realistic to Knives himself. Vash's kindness and sadness was realistic as well. I do hope to read the rest of your stories. This one was great. Updat as soon as you can. With Regard. HellsAlchemist |
| Sugar Pill 2007-06-29 ch 41, | abuseAnd smile?? O_o Yeah, that I can believe. Legato, A+ in Blood Thirsty Genocide 101. Short, but very effective. :) |
| Sugar Pill 2007-06-29 ch 40, | abuseThis one was interesting. Elendira has always been such a weird character for me... I can't ever figure out what's going on inside her head. Also always interesting to see Knives portrayed as something other than the cold hard bastard he pretends to be. Good stuff. :) |
| Sugar Pill 2007-06-29 ch 39, | abuseHeheeh, I liked this one. :) Especially Wolfwood's line about how they're all a little bizarre... and not that much different. A nice, subtle way to put that. :) |
| WeKissInMyDreams 2007-05-06 ch 38, | abuseInteresting. Romantic, depressing, funny, sad... all at once. or at least every other chapter. |
| Girl.Interpreted 2007-04-22 ch 11, | abuse"We agreed on tongue..." Freaking priceless... hope there's a part I |
| Girl.Interpreted 2007-04-22 ch 3, | abuseSecond one in a row: grips me like a fist around my heart, a palpable thing, writing I can feel. And I want to review, but somehow feel that to try and explain how you did what you did, would damage your words with too many of my own. And so, I only wish to leave you with a description of the feeling: that this little bit of prose hits me like a favorite song, its affect immediate and visceral, a weight in the hollow of my chest. |
| Girl.Interpreted 2007-04-22 ch 2, | abuse"...she would find herself longing for the day that she would be able to watch him without fearing his tendency to fade." -- God, that's so lovely. |
| Ajd262 2007-04-22 ch 38, | abuseYou still live! Thanks for the Drabble. |
| Alaena Night 2007-02-04 ch 37, | abuseIt jumped surpisingly from people-watching to flashbacks to insurance girls. And it was mangaverse! So awesome. ^^ I hope you keep up the wonderful work on this collection. -Alaena |
| Alaena Night 2007-02-04 ch 36, | abuseAww, this was just meltingly adorable! VxM is the best! *glomps you* |
| Alaena Night 2007-02-04 ch 35, | abuseO_O LOL, I like this one. Lotsa clacks and smacks. What Vash says is so funny! -Alaena |
| Alaena Night 2007-02-04 ch 29, | abuse“I don’t know what we did to make you hate us so much, but whatever it was… I’m sorry.” Aww! That shocking observation was just totally something Millie would say. Very good job with this! I like your longer stories a lot! Great job with the description, too. -Alaena |
| Alaena Night 2007-02-04 ch 28, | abuseAww! LOL, I like what Knives says. And I love the last line, definitely. So sweet! =) -Alaena |