wow, great update...
i really hope you'd continue this story so we'll all know who's going to kidnapp the kids...

OMFG. I AM SO BORED RIGHT NOW! AND. TICKED. THIS PLACE CUT OFF MY LAST REVIEW! AND IT WAS LONG! RAWR!

2 hours!!

Why does she have to wiggle her toeS? I mean...those poor girls LMFAO Why would you put them through that!

The huge splash thing cracks me up. Like she's Shamu or something LMFAO

PS - You don't sign for a certified letter. You can sign a letter that is certified and has a return receipt on it though. DUH KATIE! LMFAO C'MON!

Aww, they really do belong to Lilian if they get distracted by a butterfly.

LIAR! HE'S A LIAR!! BOO ON HIM! LMFAO

Okay I need to eat now before I starve. YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON! KTHNX.

Wow, way to leave us hanging. Sorry it took me so long to review. I really like this story and I absolutely love the Lilian/Dave pairing. There another story I've been reading called "Sweet Talkin' Woman" with these two as a pair and ever since then I've loved these two together. The dialogue flows really well and I can't wait to see what Dave does about the letter.

Great work!

... Well, that's unfair!! Where's my motviation Katy??!! I need to get MY story finished by 2014 too ... I have major plans for that year!!

After all, that's when Noah and Elijah are going to be born :D

I'll have baby clothes to buy, college funds to contribute too, candy and lollies to stockpile for when they come visit, wrestling parodys to write down so you can sing the kids to sleep with them instead of nursery rhymes ... threatening letters to send through the mail to you about kidnapping your kids, ahem, I mean threatening mail to Vince ...

ANYWHO ..

"If you ask me where I'm going, I'll tell you I'm going to P. Sherman, Wallaby Way, Sydney. Thats where I'm going pal. You wanna know where I'm going? I'll tell you again. P. Sherman, Wallaby Way, Sydney. Thats the way I'm going, yes sir. Are you going the way I'm going? Cos I'm going to P. Sherman, Wallaby Way, Sydney!!'

... This is really strange, and you'll never ever hear me say these words again ... I AGREE WITH THE BABBOON *falls over* ... WHY COULDN'T THEY HAVE WATCHED A PIRATE MOVIE??!! huh? Huh?

PIRATES OWN. ONLY THE COOLEST PEOPLE EVER GET TO BE PIRATES AND HAVE PIRATE NAMES. IT'S A HUGE HONOUR ... *grumbles*

See, if you had sone a pirate movie I could have had a cool quote!!

Like ... "Would you stop acting like a child??!!" - From Hook, can be used in reference to anything Babboon says/does ...

Or .. "Rufio!! Rufio!!" ... also from Hook ...

Even better ..

Captain Hook - "Hear me, men. For reasons of good form, I have decided that the so-called Pan will return in three days to commit the abitriment of the sword. Smee, translate."
Smee - "In three days, we're gonna have a war! A battle between good and evil to the death!"

^^ that's my favourite. And yes, I am watching Hook. Point?^^

Work was of the suckage, thanks for asking. For some reason every one ... that's a story for later!! But back to reviewing ..

Sophia is my idol. She's like the Melina of this story. Don't get me wrong, Mads is cool .. but she just ain't sassy enough for my liking :D

Just for the record, Dave and Lil are so cutesy they make me wanna be sick LMFAO ... yeah. That's right!! I really don't need a mental image of them together in bed .. I have weird enough dreamms as it is!! And while we're on weird, my face is bleeding .. gr

Question ... I might be missing something .. but how the hell does Lil rest HER forehead between HER shoulder blades especially when HER chest is resting against HIS back?? [ew bac-ne aka back acne, like snitskys ... gros]!! Is she a contortionist now??!! LMFAO You gotta explain that one to me .. it's gone straight over my head ..

I'm with Lilian. Rack off brats, the woman needs her sleep ... she probably has nightmares lying next to that freak of nature all night long ...

Tickle Monster SUCKS. He's got nothing on the Cookie Monster .. cos at least he had cookies .. and that cool 'c is for cookie' song ..

Yum .. cookies ...

I bet his special pancakes aren't as good as mine. Mine have chocolate chips .. then, you have them with a scoop of vanilla choc chip followed by a scoop of goody goody gum drops .. YUM!! Even YOU couldn't say no to goody goody gum drops ice cream ...

I'm gonna glaze over the pool scene very quickly .. cos .. great scene .. but ... it's making me run to the toilet to throw up LMFAO ... no wrong doing on your part ... but ... ew

*minimises screen to look at johnny nitro wallpaper*
*drools*
*line dances*
*yawns*
*illegally d/l wwe theme songs ...*
*realises she probably shouldn'r have put that last one .. snorts and figures retarded ff . net probably won't post this whole thing anyway ...*

Okay, better now!!

Now, I need you to pass along a message to Lilian for me. I KNOW a qualified marriage counsellor should she wish to contact one after she discovers Daves not telling her the truth about the mail, the conniving cabron. Now, she may seem a little eccentric, but she's perfectly sane and more than interested in helping her cast of 300+ pounds of dead weight ... (everyones doing it ... Carlito dumped Whorrie, Ken gave up his briefcase ... all we need now is for half the roster to split with their egos and we'll be fine ...)

*ahem*

Anyway Lil, her name is Charity Pintle (nee Mad), and she has plenty of experience in this area .. she'll clear everything up for you, si? Then she might even help you dispose of Chad and Chris when you discover they're the ones trying to take the kids .. (they formed an alliance after that one time Eric tried to take out Chad .. see the myspace comment i left with photos a couple of weeks ago for more info ...) ... and yeah ... cheaper than most and perfect in absolutly every respect is what the word on the street is about her ...

O i never expected to see more of this story ... but i'm excited yep i am

.. Well

I'll leave a decent review ...

*sung to the tune of 'Don't Wanna Kiss the Girl' from Little Mermaid ... hey, don't look at me .. The brat has Disney Channel on while I'm writing this ... but I'm about to steal the remote off her because the rugby is bout to start ...*

TRA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA .. Katie updated a fic!

TRA LA LA LA Might not be quick, Babboon makes me sick .. but she updated the fic!

*pauses for applause*

...

*clears throat and pauses again**crickets are heard echoing through the hall*

... FINE THEN. No more songs for you.

... HI! So, I just got home from work .. with Alex the Princess .. he showed up two hours later today ... opps. And Cara the blonde is about to shot in the head by your truly .. and I only see her once a week ..

On an entirely different note .. I'm SO EXCITED about Monday. Kthnx.

.. Huh? Oh!! The STOREH. My bad. *smiles sheepishly* Let me start again ...

ROTFLFMAO .. Poster CHILD FOR ROAD RAGE??!! I know that's halfway through the story .. but that bit kills me .. I can see Lilian hobbling down the Jersey Turnpike (I know I've never SEEN the frigin Jersey turnpike, just work with me here) on a pair of crutches behind this massive garbage truck (driven by mike, of course) that has an I

HOLY MARY MOTHER OF LILIAN IN A NUNNERY!!

Hi.

Maddy and Gracie should play sometime! They have the same parents. ROTFLMFAO That's kinda odd now that I think about it...but cool!

I don't know if I want to leave a long review. You know. Since like...you've yet to review HSG and you've been home longer than I have. Hmm. HMM!

KATIE!! YOU CANNOT END THE STORY LIKE THAT!! I DEMAND YOU START A SEQUEL .. RIGHT NOW!

Oh my goodness .. I cannot believe that you ended the story like that .. wait. No, wait, yes I can .. it's such a Katie thing to do lol .. well, I must say congratulations on your most reviewed story ever!! That is fantastic news, and great motivation for that sequel lmao ... i know you said end of series, but we all know that that is entirely no possible. "The life after wwe series .. i can see it now; lilian, then moving into real time with steph and trish .. okay, so anyway!! on with the review ..

This chapter was a fantastic way to finish on a high note .. I loved it, loved the scene with dave and sophie(i'm actually starting to fan him, in the world of fandoms anyway, i'll never admit to it)I love the idea that dave is going to be the stay at home Dad .. well, at least when Lilian is away (that just screams 'comedy series') lol ..

Okay, now on to the story in it's entirety. The way you made the characters come to life, the interaction between the characters, the moments that made me jump up and down *happy dance time lol* and the moments that almost brought tears. This series has been exceptional in the fact that it never became stale; new scenarios and fresh faces kept it alive and ensured that the content was never dry. I have to applaud your enthusiasm for this fic, and your determination to keep writing even when things got in the way. I have been seriously persuaded to enjoy this fandom now, something i said would be a challenge for at the start of the story .. and now 31 chapters later i can finally accept it. You handled romance, action, suspense and all those glorious things with ease, and as I've said so so many times before you manage to make the transitions smooth and fluent.

I'll be honest and say that Lilian hasn't always been a favourite diva of mine, but since I've become hooked on your fiction (yes, katy, and yours too) I tend to scour the site for new ones .. but nothing beats these .. I have to thank you for sharing your talent and this fandom with me, this story has become an inspiration for a couple of thins i have planned, including a one shot i'm about to post lol ..

I don't know what else I can say Katie, but thank you for having us along on this spectacular ride with you; i loved every minute and cannot wait for your next fic!! :)

Thank you xx

Wow! I didn't see that coming. I've really loved this story; and I'm hoping to see more from you.

wow. that's it. it's all done. =(

this has and is possibly, one, if not, my favourite wrestling fics! well done girlie!

Oh. My. God. I hate you. You are doing an epilogue. Or you are beyond dead.

I can't believe you ended it like this! You said it'd be happy! do you know how awful that'd be if Lilian left the WWE? Do you know how much I'd cry!? YEAH. CRY. ME! LMFAO BAD.

Ahem.

I really love this story Katie. You did an amazing job. Now you're going to have to finish your other stories you've started. :-) This was really awesome. Lots of good ideas, and even more good writing skills. You're truly talented, chica.

I can't wait to read another one of your stories. This was perfect.

HOT DIGGITY HAWT DAWG. *DEAD* LMFAO

THESE PAST 2 DAYS HAVE RULED! YESTERDAY MORNING I GOT CHAPTER 29 AND THEN I GOT YOUR UBER AWESOME TAPE AND NOW TODAY I GET 30!! AAHH! LIFE IS GOOD.

I only wish I didnt' have to work so I could freaking watch that tape again.

And yet they don't have sex that much, how's he gonna knock her up? Hmm? LMFAO Damn it, they should be like..friggin rabbits or something LMFAO HELLO. LILIAN. YOU'RE MARRIED TO HIM! HAWT. HAWT. SEXEH MAHN. SEXEH MAHN. LIVIN LAK NO UDDA SEXEH MAHN CAHN! yeah.

Anyways. LMFAO Vince. You McAsshole. LMFAO damn steph. RAWR!! LMFAO

Okay I gotta skidaddle. I think Anna's here. Talk to you later! MUCHAS MUCHAS MUCHAS MUCHAS GRACIAS FOR THE TAPE!

lol how did we figure it out?? number one, the nausea got me straight away, it just clicked; number two, you would never have lilian seriously hurt or sick .. so, that just confirmed my theory LMAO ..

anywho .. forget everything i said about vince in my last review, my opinion of him has done a complete 180 in approximately five minutes hahaha .. the one thing i must comment on is how the characters of marc and mike come to life in your work; we never get even a hint of what either of them are like through the shows, yet your writing gives them both this breath of fresh air and creates two solid new characters who work really well into the cohesion of the story. I love how you manage to keep your writing tight and succint, something i always have problems with (which sucks, being a journalism student LOL). I'm so glad that Steph continues to live on in your fics, I can't thank you enough for that!! I thoroughly enjoyed the tension and the suspense throughout the chapter, you always master those two genres rather well, and I have to applaud the audacity of the other superstars to stick around and find out what was happening, that's so true to form! And of course, the surprise at the end .. it has to be a boy this time!!

LMAO anyway, Katie, fantastic job as usual, can't wait to see the final installment in this one, and can't wait for your next lilian(benoit? hint hint lol) fic .. great work!!

i just got two works for ya... ** brilliant.
now that was some drama right there and i loved it!
she's pregnant! whot. and go steph! XD

it's so sad to see this fic ending so soon, but i'm sure you'll do lots more dave and lil fics cos of all these wonderful reviews! i hope.

*claps* another great installment!
she's preggers again! =0
i'm all anxious for the next installment now!
write more soon.