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KrazyKarah
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
This is interesting...what will happen now?
Kris
2006-08-28 . chapter 1
I have to say I wasn't sure what to think of this the first time I read it when you first posted it. I just reread it, and I think you did an amazing job. It seemed like you really nailed Rory's emotions and thought process. This story was also different than just about anything I've ever read (but all of your stories are the same way).

You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the great work.
Austin
2006-08-09 . chapter 1
I liked it.
BehrBeMine
2006-08-09 . chapter 1
*This* is the Rogan I've been looking for. Logan is not the sun, the moon, and the stars. He is not Rory's knight. He does not wear shining armor. But he is all she has. And she does love him. And they are together, regardless.

Get out of my head, girl! Stop reading my mind! :)
Fallen Heart
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
A great fic, K. Even if I ship Rory with Logan, and you don't. It's extremely well written, like all your fics are. I'm so glad to have you back. :D
coachlvr
2006-08-05 . chapter 1
hi!! i really love ur stories!! especilly "THINGS CHANGE" ! please update that one! at first is saw the last update and that was like more than a year ago. so i thought, maybe she doesnt use fanfic anymore.. but tehn i saw that u recently updated this story, so please please please!! update the other one,i really love it. thanks, btw ur really talented =)
aphi72
2006-08-01 . chapter 1
I'm BACKK!

I loved this. I always thought that there was so much left out of this scene. You've played it beaut-i-fully. I'm also glad that you mentioned the scene in the bar where she "blamed" Logan for HER decisions. Never thought that was fair.

Jack
FairyGirl03
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
I hate Logan. I'm a 100% Trory shipper. But I thought I'd give this a try. I liked it. I still can't really beleive Rory took the jerk back, again. But I liked this. This was good.

Kelli
Mrs Boyscout
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
Oh to see the inner-workings of the Gilmore Girl's mind. I loved this. Usually, I am not a fan of the "enhanced" script, but I really like this. You added a lot of interesting thoughts -- most of which were going through my head, as well.

But did you actually have to write "pasty backside?" Now I have to get that visual out of my head all over again.

:) Michelle
GGGirl
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
A most accurate depiction of what can't be depicted.

I usually don't enjoy when writers rewrite scenes that I've already seen. But you do it with such originality, and the perspective, while not surprising - seems so real and heartfelt, that I couldn't help but love it.

BTW, ditto on favoring Trories. If we can't have the real thing on the show, think you can give us some?
abercrombiegirl786
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
Would have liked it as a story not so much as a one shot!
chelsea vetter
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
i thought it was good
i am a trory fan too and i got annoyed that she went back to logan. he is too short. hot but short
natashajay
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
i really like it, are you planning on continuing? i think you should if you can think of something a twist-like jay and silent bob.

natasha ;-P
abc79-de
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
amen!

I mean, I love Logan, you know, but how crazy was she to do that when clearly, CLEARLY, she wasn't ready to. And furthermore, didn't know if she'd ever be ready to? Having a nekkid Doyle in her only place of refuge was NOT a reason to go home with a walking STD test.

Not that I don't love Logan. 'Cause I do. And I know he thought being a slut puppy would work for him as it had in the past. Slut puppy looks really crappy on a pro/con list. It outweighs several even key good points, like 'he loves me' and 'he doesn't wanna lose me'.

Sigh.

Great work revealing the inner workings of her mind. And a great prefix for another little fic you might finish soon, no? Some of us need to see our non-GG crushes in print...

anyhow, back on track, excellent little ficlet. I don't know why the show didn't go back and really address this, more than her letting Jess BARELY kiss her--which is not dealing with it.

If only they'd let US deal with these issues!

Great job. Love it when you get a rush of brilliance.

ames
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