Fuu nailed Hayner. He was asking for it. Two weeks later, Seifer was not happy.Poor Hayner. Great story.

A fic focusing on the kids in Twilight Town? A well-written one? That breaks some cliches? Win. Thank you for making me smile.

I like how you wrote this. It works really well, better than if it was a group of long fics. You could probably pull it off, but it's good like this. More soon?

As I said on the board, this is a very nice representation of the Twilight Town gangs. Everyone is in character, and it has a nice balance of humor and drama. And I especially like #15--it almost feels like that's the way Sora, Riku, and Kairi could have turned out. Great work.