this story is awesome so why rewrite it wish you would just pick up where you left off

This story is really impressive! I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next! Please update soon, and keep up the good work!

Wow, that was intense. Wonder where Knuckles'll go next. Perhaps Rouge's place. Wonder how well he'll get along with Crystal. Somehow, I doubt it might be well, considering how Shadow & Rouge described Knuckles to Crystal. I'm expecting Knuckles to hit Crystal so hard that he'll send her flying across the room into something. I wonder how Crystal'll react to learning that Shadow's her biological father. That'd definitely be something to see.

OMG update soon that was awesome. I loved it. ^^ great job.

neato. it was really good. i loved it. awesoem and now i'm out of compliments lOL

LOVED IT. it was sad that he left them though;_;

awesome i loved it. can't wait to read the next one.

loved it. awesome. it's really good.

OMG I loved it. I'm reading the next chapter now. awesome

Love the story!So far so good! Add on soon please!
And remember shadouge 4 eva! peace out!
-Fastestthingalive34

Love it. Simply great story, absolutely cant wait for the next chapter!! I wish i could fastforward time to get it now, I dont want it to end, even for just a little while until the next chapter... you're killing me! Anyway, most of the stories i read making shadow and rouge have a kid tend to portray them too... out of character a bit too much, but i think you did a great job portraying change, but not so much as to completely destroy who the characters ARE, especially with Shadow, i.m.o.

ANYWAY! I'll stop rambling on about what i loved; the list wouldnt ever end...

I hope you update as soon as you possibly can - I dont know how long I can survive without more! :)

hhey boy good chapter!
love the way shadow fixed the things hehe well hope he come back with Rouge and Crystal
hehe
bye bye
boy! hehe

Shadow didn't kill him? Shadow should of hit harder.
Sweet sweet story yet so dramatic.

Aw come on, Shad! That was too close. Oh well, maybe next time. Update soon!

MY FREAKING HELL! Great chappz so far and i cannot wait for the next. good job and keep going ;)