looks at ss4-link
"your very scary... but a good writer... just please check into a menal hospital before you hurt someone"
just kidding

Good story, a little jumpy at times..

Spelling needs work

I look forward to more.

sigh you had an intresting story here before you got unrealistic with akanes legal punishment while i am not sure of the exact laws of japan they would not allow compeling someone to be nakid and if their laws are anything like ours that she needs psykeatric help would get her out of jail time but rather have her in a mental instatute and i make this reveiw just from having read he first few lines of this chapter

Dude, this is a well written story, continue on. I ask you to consider Nabiki as a pairing possibility, but it is your fic and so is your choice. Just watch your spelling a bit and you'll do great.

interesting

Getting better. Need to be careful that you spend more time on dialogue and less on story telling. Otherwise it feels like a summary.

The one thing is Soun and Nabiki also need to pay for Akane's behavior. They both encouraged it, Soun by not teaching Akane how to be a true martial artist and control her temper and Nabiki for encouraging Kuno (who is little more than a stalker) and the Hentai Horde.

This is pretty good, but you need to work on your grammar, especially punctuation. I can't wait until the next chapter where Akane gets led away kicking and screaming to her death or life in prison!

This fic has an interesting start, but I don't quite understand. Akane killed Genma and Ranma still goes to school? And when he comes home he still allows her to hit him?

The hell...why did you repost this, SS4 Link? It is exactly the same as the first time, right now to the author notes...

This is practicaly an exact duplicate of someone elses story. I never give bad reviews, but I am 100% certain that I have read this story before hand. Unless you wrote it and deleted it, then I am sorry.

Interesting start. Will Akane go to jail?

typical akane bashing crap.

Um I think I read this fic before & I remember asking this question the first time.

Why did they head off to school when they should have called the cops to deal with the DEAD BODY that is in the house?

I know when my mother died in her sleep I had to call the cops because they were the ones that could call the M.E. to take her body to the morge.

So why didn't do the same?