Excellent story. It was hilarious, it was sweet, it was deliciously angsty, and I'm sure that if I were in the habit of crying over things, the ending would have made me cry. But as I rarely cry, all I can say for sure was that it was as saddening as it was sweet.

Poor Sev. After everything, what finally breaks him was the thought that it might happen again. Broke his heart.

Lovely story. I really enjoyed it.

Absolutely phenominal - you epilogue actually moved me to tears. Without doubt the most moving end to a story that I have ever read. Congratualtions and thank you for such a wonderful read!

Hi. a bitter sweet ending.
Severus in love with a muggle? Brilliant!

Maria

oh how sweet. that was an awesome story. I loved it

Hallo Leliha,
ich habe gelesen, dass Du Deutsche bist und da mir das Schreiben in meiner Muttersprache doch leichter fällt, gibt`s mein review auf Deutsch:
SUPER, SUPER, SUPER.
Ich lese relativ viele fanfictions, von denen man die große Masse liest (oder auch nur anfängt, sie zu lesen) und schnell wieder vergisst.
Bei Dir kann man richtig mit Claire und Severus mitfühlen, das Beschriebene fühlt sich echt/rund an. Nicht wie bei manchen anderen fics, die nur das Muster, „Severus wird schwer verletzt, genest und findet seine große Liebe“ runterspulen.
Bei Dir hatte ich dieses beklemmende Gefühl des Mitleidens mit Severus, wenn er mal wieder sehr leiden muss und niemand anders ihm beisteht. Du bist drastisch, aber das macht es echt. Umso schöner ist das Ende.
Und der Epilog setzt dem Ganzen noch die (traurige) Krone auf.
Verbeugung vor der Meisterin.
Ich bin gespannt, wie sich Deine anderen beiden fics entwickeln.
Liebe Grüße,
Jossy

So far, I've only read up to chapter 11 - and can't wait to continue *g*.

Excellent idea and excellent story! Well told and written. The characters are nicely developing.
Two points so far I'd like to give a (constructive) criticism: how come Professor Snape fits so easily into the muggle world so he can hide effectively? And how did he made his living so far?

The fitting-in-the-muggle-world part is, in my eyes, not logical - but told so well that it doesn't matter.

aw, that's the sweetest thing since the notebook :P i'm a sucker for chickfics :P great job!

i wish the original ending was at twenty three instead of twenty four...sighs...
but it was a really well written story..
this made me like snape even more..=]

OH...MY...**...GOSH...That's how it ends?!!?
Oh well. It was worth reading anyways.

Rather a depressing ending. People never learn, do they? But if Nelly blieves that pureblood guff, why did she marry a half-blood?

Oh dear, this was so sad with Severus dieing and a new hate arising. I hope his grandsons keep their promise and I hope their mother gets a clue.

happy endings.

I so love happy ever after. :-) An epilogue? That would be nice, I'd love to read it.

Finally the happy ending, for a while I didn't think we'd ever have a happy ending to read in this story. Now do write the epilogue. I enjoyed Kingsley parrying Linda Davis' questions, it would have been interesting to see what Arthur would do in a conversation with a real live Muggle who knew nothing of the wizarding world.
I noticed a few things that need correction, mainly the order the words should be in a sentence, verb tenses and the right verb to use. There are not a lot of correction to do, but if you make them it will clean up your chapter and make it flow better.