Love this Dorothy x Seravy fic. They're not OC and the way Dorothy said her feelings to Seravy was great!

Gack! I really like your story about this couple! Hope you write more of them! XDD

i sooooooooooo needed this. i cried the whole time dorothy was. it's just so frustrating that in the anime they never really had the closure and whole routine is really getting tiring. thank you for making this

hi! it's been quite a while since i've read ANY fanfic and i know that this was written quite some time now but i truly enjoyed your story. i particularly liked the part when Seravi cleared out his Elizabeth-as-a-symbol-of-what-he-"should"-have-wan ted issue. LOL! thank you for sharing your take on the couple's situation. it produced a rather nice story.

and yes, finally... P

This is just like he episodes only much better because finally Dorothy and Seravy finally talked about their relationship. You have a very good introduction. And there are no out of characters. I love this a lot. It's so sweet.

Even after all these years, I really can't reconcile with the ending from the anime! I'm watching the whole series again, and I kept telling myself that I'd be writing something like this, but I never have. I wish there were more stories like this. Damn Seravi! Haha.

Wow The best I have ever read!

wow...i love the angst and romance in there...and yeah, can't blame dorothy for feeling that way...sometimes i myself felt like choking seravy to death! if i were dorothy, i would've migrated to other country and leave him...but then again, seravy is world's greatest magician...he'd also move where she go just to irritate her huh? i guess their kind of love is full of ups and downs...and i'd be heck surprised if they actually married!

nice one...i love it!

there are too few chacha fics.

i'm glad you wrote a seravi/dorothy one! they're so cute together. even w/ all the fighting. :D

wonderful fic. :D

love the anime! iT's awesome.

hey! i really really really really like your story it almost made me cry!wa! i love it remember to write more stories!

Closure is where the money is, seriously.

Well done!

yes, closure! gah! i love this! i've been looking for fics that would give their relationship a sort of closure. despite the fact that they were married in the ending, i still feel short-changed about some facets of their relationship. that's why i'm very grateful that you made this. take care!

i agree that the behavior of this lovely pair does need a serious explanation and i actually have my own, but yours is also very nice! a beautiful ending.

It's a great story, man it makes me cry, it's so funny yet so sweet...LOVE IT so much!