Cool Story!!

Wait, if Al is Alphonse, wouldn't that make him her great-uncle?

...That IS complicated.

Awesome!

*gags at the drama*
O_O...hmm. this is troubling...must PM Kontra!

Um, not to be insulting or anything, but you should re-count the amounts of tattoos Ally has. I believe she has four, not three.

NO!
I WANT MORE. now. otherwise i'll use alchemy to form a voodoo doll and i will torture u for the rest of your life.


lol. i was only (half) kidding.
please write more??

hey! i made a fanfic about an Allie Elric, too! it's called Fullmetal's Legacy, and Ed gets married and has 2 daughters with Winry. Then he has another set of twins, but one is a Stillborn, so Emily and Allie try to transmute the soul using the original body. unfortunatly, the story's going nowhere. My Allie's alchemist name is the Ironwill Alchemist because she's so stubborn. ^_^

Oh! Look! Its the 'Not-incest' Fic! We! I've been wondering what happened to you! Thank you for the update...and proofread a bit please...=)

Uh oh!

OOH, LE SUSPENSE!
now get your ASS on akuma.

...WOAH.
I'm almost...insulted.
This...this is...that was grammar!

so its not insest...heheh...

Wee! Update!

Having read some of your other stories, as well as this one, I'd just like to say that it's incredibly brazen and pompous of you to demand a certain number of reviews before delivering another mind-shatteringly awful piece of writing. Perhaps if you, oh, I don't know, learned to proofread - no, scratch that, learned to WRITE AT ALL, then you wouldn't have to request your reviews.

That said, stop writing and play in traffic.

Polly of the FFDC.

That's interesting and amusing. I like!