So pity that this is not finished...

good story
update soon and nice plot twist

Poor Qymaen…

An interesting chapter and an original perspective about Grievous.

Update soon, mate.

WW

“My name is Qymaen” he said reluctantly “Qymaen Jai Sheelal"

General Grievous? Wow!

Nice chapter, mate.

WW

Ah! A nice introduction to the story.

I wonder about the Kaleesh, though. Who is he? Why is he in the story?

Guess I have to read more.

Carry on, mate.

WW

Uh oh. Sorry I havent reviewed for so long. Ive been busy. And Im having major writers block. But Im working on an orignal story so thats part of it. Ive been working on the characters mostly. Now writing yet. Good Chapter

Yay i am so glad you dicided to keep this story up and it is very good but i wish for one thing now i don't really know how hard it is to write but do you think you can make the chapters longer anyways good story update

O...odd. Good job even though that's not exactly what happened. It might be a...AU or something. I love it anyways. Short chapter. By the way, I am 98% done with mine so...review ASAP.

Oh this is getting good ^^ I wish I wasnt having writers block. I have those for long spells on everything *cries* I LOVE THIS!

Very good, short, but good. Update soon.

short, but this story has defently caught my interest and it was very well writen i hope you countine the story

O_O Oh dear. Interesting. I WANT TO TALK WITH YOU! since you dont have you pm on can I pretty please have your email?