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Reviews For: Becoming Whole

MAGCo3
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuseYou have a good start. I like the way you delve into Grianne's fears. I hope you can write more on her struggles as Ard Rhys. You write a lot like Terry Brooks by looking into the feelings and fears and not just actions. Good luck I can't wait to hear more.
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