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| FluidDegree 2008-01-15 ch 17, | abusethis was such a sweet story, i really enjoyed reading it. |
| atruwriter 2007-10-23 ch 17, | abuseI loved this. I know you've obviously had to put up with junk about John being OOC, but I really enjoyed how you portrayed him. He wasn't sappy, which was very good, but he did love her. I absolutely loved the whole scene where he told Magneto there was no way he was walking away with John's daughter. I was grinning through the whole thing. I think I read it three times, just because the visual was so great! Love protective!John and motherly!Marie. Great work. This is definitely going on my favorites! :D |
| Sublime Angel 2007-08-30 ch 17, | abuseexcellent story! i dunnow at else to say! i liked it a whole lot! write more! good storyline, characters were captured nicely. on the whole a job well done! |
| HumbugGirl 2007-03-29 ch 17, | abuseI rather liked this story. It felt a little rushed towards the end considering the pace of the earlier chapters but over all it was good - with the exception a few typos and grammatical errors, but then we all make those occasionally. :) |
| ingridmr 2006-11-23 ch 17, | abuseOMG! I am bawling my eyes out! That was so good, I loved it! So sweet and wonderful. I loved mushy Pyro and the idea of Rogue and Pyro having a wonderful family. Wow. Thank you so much for writing such a fantastic story. |
| HondaAshiya 2006-11-18 ch 17, | abuseI don't know how I missed this story before (I love Ryro's) but I'm glad I found it now. I read all the chapters in one sitting and was happy with how it turned out. Pyro was a little OOC but it fit this story nicely. Good job. |
| Corlin 2006-10-27 ch 17, | abuseOh come on how can you not have a sequel to this? This is brilliant. But if you dont want to I understand. I had a blast reading this story. Continue writing in the future because you are great at it! |
| The Chibi's Are Stalking Me 2006-10-20 ch 17, | abuseOH MY GOD, why do people enjoy making me cry?!?! I LOVED this story!! It's awesome!! If I asked REALLY nicely, would you at least CONSIDER a sequel?? |
| Milo Maniac 2006-09-23 ch 17, | abuse*sigh* That was so awesome! Excellent ending to such an awesome story. :) |
| Milo Maniac 2006-09-23 ch 16, | abuseOhmyGosh! This is so f'ing fantastic! I absolutly love this chapter! |
| Mrs. Joe Jonas DJ DANGA 2006-09-23 ch 17, | abusereally good! keep going! I LOVED IT! |
| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2006-09-22 ch 17, | abuseAw, wow. What a perfect way to end this story. I really liked what you did with it. I hope you update your other stories soon. Till next time, ~Chica~ |
| PsychoTherapy 2006-09-22 ch 17, | abuseDude... Its like.. Over. -sniffle- I dont know whether to rejoice or feel sad! Seriously, this fic rocked. I'm glad you made it end on a really sweet note. Now, excuse the length of this comment, but there are just a few parts that I just HAVE TO commet on.. -sheepish grin- Firstly... "No one, other than John and Marie were quite sure how it happened, but Marie eventually got pregnant for the second time." -raises eyebrow- Thats right, just leave it to your reviewers pervy imaginations, huh? lol But seriously, that line has prompted too many unmentionable Ryro thoughts that would probably make me blush to explain.. Haha... Secondly... "...his parents were widely known as Colossus, and Shadowcat, or Peter and Kitty. ." I love that pairing! Seriously, reading that was like an added bonus to the story!! w00t! Thirdly..(lol, i swear there aren't to many more!)... "Speaking of Logan, he had seemed to have gotten closer to Aunt Ro. One could even foresee a possible romance budding, though no one dared to question him." -laughs- Again, you've seemed to combine like ALL my fav movie verse pairings in this fic! -claps- And lastly... "When a shy, naive Mississippi native crossed paths with a ball of fire and gasoline. Common acquaintances grew to friendship. Friendship became a forbidden love. Forbidden love gave way to a series of events that shaped that pair more than any could image." Seriously, cutest ending/summary thing EVER. I luvd it! You can't help but plaster a big goofy grin on your face when you read that... Oh! And I almost forgot! "More P/R fics in the future..." I am DEFINITELY gonna hold you to that!! Heh, you think I'm kidding, ut I'm REALLY not... -smirk- And, they're gonna be coming soon, right? Right? -pleads with ginormous puppy dog eyes- ;) |
| KC 2006-09-22 ch 17, anon. | abuse*cheers loudly* I loved it. I hope you do like a sequel or something for Cutler. That'd be so cool! I absolutely loved this story! I bow to your awesomeness, and this is definitely going in the Favorites for a later read. Awesome job! Keep writing! |
| xLiLix 2006-09-22 ch 17, anon. | abuse...*sniff*...it's...*sniff*...o v e r...no! I can't believe it's done, no more, why God, Why?!?! Ohh...how I LOVE this!! Such a fabolous beggining, perfect plot, amazing ending... I repeat: can't believe is over. So sad there's not gonna be a sequel, maybe you should reconsider...*nudge, wink*... but that is up to you. By the way, how could I not review to every chapter, when every single one is so icredible... should have revied twice, hehe. You should know that I love you for writing this, gonna say it again: I LOVE YOU!! Write more stories so I can read more!! See ya!! |