trowa...i feel so bad...and so sorry for what happened...isnt it just sad how these stories of rape and torture are true to our lives? realityis reality...too bad we have to live with it ne? ive said this in another fic before...but...we are born to live and we live to die...but whats in between is what u have to deal with...harsh or not...its reality. Please make a sequal to this story...where he finds comfort maybe in heero's arms? even if for just a littel while...

Very graphic, even though I thought it was really cruel fro Trowa, I feel it was a good story because it teaches you to stay away from perverted men. I kid I kid, I thought it was mainly because of the detailed imagery you've created. I felt bad for Trowa, seriously.

*sighs* I'm sorry to hear that you got a review accusing you of being disgusting. I really wish that I could take it from your memory - you didn't deserve it.

I don't know why you're so angry, and I don't really think it's my business to, but I'd like you to know that not everyone is narrow-minded, and not everyone is like the fucking religious worlds that encompass and suffocate us.

I'm not.

Thanks for the fic; someone's gotta tell what can happen to you, or me, or anyone.

Don't let them get to you, because there are plenty more where I come from, and we, we will back you, and in the end, we will know that we do what we can...which is more than I can say for most.

-tati1

-tati1

Speachless... Your work... Is great! I would like 2 kno more about u if possible.. Keep wrting

WHOA this was good. You remind me a lot of my cousin. . .the way you write about God? He's a lot like that...I think the song was okay with the story; everyone who looks at it and passes it off as wrong because of who wrote it is just shallow and immature.

But,lol, at the point where you wrote about God being a fairy tail,KoRn's 'Chutes and Ladders' was playing on my radio, and that made the angst factor awesomely twisted._ sorry if I offended you somehow -_-;;*mutters to self* baka baka baka

But all in all, this was one kick-ass angst story, no matter who says it wasn't.

Don't worry about feeling sick and twisted; everyone has a sick twisted side to them somewhere. Hell, some people get a lot of recignition(sp?i forgot how to spell -_-;;). Take Stephen King. You're a really good writer, don't let shallow people get you down.

Anyway, I liked the story. The is a paragraph in there (close to the last part, when he is saying but you will be with me forever that is so great. I love it.

Now, it may be because I don't really know this fandom, but I realy didn't get it how the song matchs the story. But ot's nbot important. I'll think more about it. I liked it.

Oh, well. I just HAD to read what the first reviewer said. I can see her point, but I don't exactly agree. i think fanfic is such a free world, you can write whethever the hell you want to write.

Anyway, I liked the story. The is a paragraph in there (close to the last part, when he is saying but you will be with me forever that is so great. I love it.

Now, it may be because I don't really know this fandom, but I realy didn't get it how the song matchs the story. But ot's nbot important. I'll think more about it. I liked it.

I think your story gave the point perfictly. and i really cant see why some one whould flame that. you gave what lil tro was feeling and what was going on in his head. im a athious as well, (and if i spelt that wrong im sarry. spelling is not my strong suit. Thank you bill gates for spell check on microsoft!)

I understand what Trowa thought and felt. I don't think you're sick or what not. I think you're wrong about God, but I had my doubts too.

Queen

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww poor trowa!

Just because its a pop song, doesn't mean it's not got something to say, and maybe Britney could have handled it a little more sensitively, but the song fits your fic perfectly.

Loved the story.

Simply amazing. I'm just blown away by this fic. I do enjoy the trowa rape (as bizaar as it is) and I never get bored of this fic.

I don't know what anyone else thinks about this fic, and in a way I don't care; it's none of my business, it's their mindset, they can think what they want. I only know what I thought of it. I thought that the emotional weight of this was balanced in such a way that allowed the feelings to build, allowed the sympathy and the pity and the pain to accumulate, without becoming overwhelming. The way in which the lyrics were presented and intermingled with the actual piece of writing gave an astonishing double meaning that most would not expect, yet most would find that same double entendre rings extremely true in this context. I do not believe that you are mocking rape. Anyone who is under that unfortunate misapprehension is probably either a person who believes that Britney does no wrong, or a person who is under 12 years of age. In the former case, they should not have read this piece of work if they couldn't hold their tongue; in the latter, they should not have been reading this in the first place, period. I am aware that this compliment is probably a cliché in itself, but this was very well-written. Rarely do you find a story in which the author captures the emotions of the characters during the act of violation, not just afterwards. I appreciate your posting this, and not to sound rude or anything...screw it, I know it's going to sound rude. The person who posted under the name "Bianca", the one who wrote that scalding first review, seriously needs to either take a literacy course or get a dictionary and look up the meaning of "double entendre", and then get the Britney Spears dance music out of her head long enough to realize that whether the tune is perky or not, the words match the situation. That was my own personal advice, and if "Bianca" has problems with it she can take it up with me. Now that I'm done with that ranting, I must say that this is getting extremely long. Thank you again for posting this, and don't be so hard on yourself because some people are immature and/or teenyboppers to the max. The emotions, not the rhythms of the music, are what counts.

Dal

A very well written fic, especially on such a difficult/emotional subject as rape. I love how you have (IMO) interpreted the lyrics of the song and how they fit with the fic. (I'll never see this sobg in the same light again!:) Excellent work.

What can I say... It's a great story! I thought I knew everything about rape-fics - but you did something I couldn't even imagine - and you did it perfectly. Thank you!