Aw :) Such a happy couple.

I think for that you're a good TA writer for someone who claims to be a TR fan. Hmm, maybe deep down inside you're really a TA fan? Anyway it is a sweet fanfic, though I would like to know Tenchi's perspective, that we don't get enough. Please write more TA fanfics, you're good at it.

cute...TA can be good pair..but i rily wonder y oder pipol get pisd wid ayeka? wats wrong? aftr ol she's just an anime karakter..tsk..newayz..ur fic is nice

This was soooooo kawaii! I love it _ A/T are the best!

What a fluffy piece of . Number 1 it was terrible number 2 it was god awful why don't you stop writing and apply yourself to making snap decisions about people you don't even ing know because you seem to be good at that. Nimesh has been my friend for 7 years. And yes I wrote that about getting married. But I never flamed his stories and those stupid revies I know he found them hilarious and only did that chapter to annoy me. Not because he wanted people like you to say what you want. And I'm sure you agree with Nimiza's story after this chapter but that would be just plain typical from people like you. And thank you for driving me to flame someone because this is my first flame. So shut up Because if you think this flame is anything. You don't want to play with fire.

cool! more T/A fanfics!

OOOOOooooohhh...I liked it! No, I loved it! T/A forever!

! This fic rawks!

That was cute, a little OOC but cute! I liked it! Nice job though it is really hard to write a fic like this without making it really ed up but ya did it! Peace

(snifs) that was sooooooooooooo romantic! so passionate! even if it was short, i thought it was the most romantic thing i ever read... i wish me and kanai,( the who i'm deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeply in love with)could be a couple like that! ayeka! i'm glad it wasn't a ryoko and tenchi or a sakuya and tenchi fanfic cause i find toooo many of those. NEVER WRITE THOSE AYEKARYOKO FANFICS! NASTY! any way keep on writing those ayekatenchi fanfics.

This was a very nice fic. Very sweet, and nicely written. I liked the Ryoko-Ayeka scene early on. Good work.

i didnt read the whole story. (i usually dont with T&A fics)

but it didnt seem half bad. nice to see you aren't biased against either girl. Dont see that too often. Im biased, ill admit it too.

Personally im a Ryoko fan (ducks under rotten fruit thrown by Aeka peanut gallery)

so i look forward to your T&R fic.

Very romantic. But where was everyone? Also, Tenchi seems to be uncharacteristically smooth (but that's the way Ayeka likes him).

NICE! _ Sorry I didn't read this sooner, but I had a final today, and I have two more next week... ::head falls on keyboard in exhaustion:: sdjbkvg OOPS! Maybe my head hit the keyboard a little TOO hard.

U cant possibly be an ryoko fan... if you are then,what the hell happened? Or is it just so ppl dont flame your fic? If you know Ryoko and are her fan, u would know that Ryoko would never say that to Ayeka because of her pride...

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