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| Maura 2006-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job... I laughed throughout the entire thing. |
| JayBee-Bug 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuse*grins* Ooh, that's good. I love how snarky that little voice is. Very good job, excellent little mental conversation. |
| ayesha-s 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseoh cute!! |
| sweet-surrender5 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abusehahah i love these stories...they're so funny! "why dont you just beat yourself over the head with a frying pan and put us all out of our misery!!" lmao. keep it up...do another sequel, please! id liek to find out what he does... -s.s.5 |
| tokengeekshipper 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI am absolutely smitten with you. SMITTEN I SAY! |
| chiops 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's nice - yeah, heart beats flowers way over. Thanks for this story! |
| stareagle 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseDelicious! I love these conversations... Not only hilarious, but insightful as well. Keep writing please |
| abigailc 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI see, it wasn't Grissom that pulled his head out of his a** it was his conscience. Good thing it is so *vocal*, otherwise we might have had to wait another 10 years before we saw anything happening on the relationship front. You have quite the sarcastic wit. Makes for great reading. Another great story. I look forward to the next installment. As always, keep up the great work!! |