NO! You can't end there! That's just cruel. Update soon!

please update this story is really good.

Nice chaps.

It's hard to think of Naruto as being so suspicious of Sasuke because for most of Part 1 he really is clueless. He gets smart after he leaves for training with Jiraiya after the Chunnin Exams.

Please update soon!

OH MY GOD!!
love your story.
love the fighting scenes too
great story

I really can't believe you only have 6 reviews up until now...This story is SO good! I'm a OC lover and Miyuki is my favourite so far. The plot is great and I love how you describe the battle scenes. Very realistic!(kishimoto-style heheh^^)

Please post the next chapter soon!

Wow. That was bloody. I like this story. I really have no idea what happens after the Chunnin exams because I've only read the manga up to there, but I can somewhat figure it out.

Please update soon!

That's so sad! Now Sasuke is going to be all alone again...I think...It's your story after all. Oh well please write more so I found out what happens!YAY!

YOSH!-Suru

You will never improve as a writer if you keep writing suefics.

MARY SUE (n.):
1. A variety of story, first identified in the fan fiction community, but quickly recognized as occurring elsewhere, in which normal story values are grossly subordinated to inadequately transformed personal wish-fulfillment fantasies, often involving heroic or romantic interactions with the cast of characters of some popular entertainment.
2. A distinctive type of character appearing in these stories who represents an idealized version of the author.
3. A cluster of tendencies and characteristics commonly found in Mary Sue-type stories.

The act of committing Mary Sue-ism is sometimes referred to as “self-insertion.”

A Mary Sue story is the literary equivalent of opening a package that you thought would be the new jacket you ordered on eBay, only it turns out to contain a poorly-constructed fairy princess costume made of some lurid and sleazy material. It's tailored to fit a human-size Barbie doll, not you; and when you hold it up to the light, you can see the picked-out stitchmarks where someone else's name used to be embroidered across the bodice. The dress has been used but not cleaned, and appears to have last been worn during a rather sloppy romantic interlude …

I want a refund.

Hm.The symbol on the headband sounds like the Triforce on Zelda...WAY COOL! I see that everywhere now...I even say it on Inuyasha!Anyway, once again that was a great chapter! So far Sasuke and Miyuki sound like a pretty good pairing! Keep up the goodwork!

YOSH!-Suru

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

Aw, Sasuke's so nice! The OC is pretty violent though. Stabbing someone in the eye?OW!That's like Mortal Kombat right there.Anyway keep up the good work and please write more!Please?