interesting so far. Most of the Van Helsing stories I've read have turned out to be complete garbage, but I have hope for this one.

it's was so sweet.

It's pretty good so far, one suggestion is you might want to make Gabriel a little more gruff. Considering he just lost anna. Just my opinoin. otherwise it's really good.

is was cool

cool, great story, i like it! and I think this chapter will to come next but this word said "wake up van helsing"...I remember from the movie "vanilia sky" oh gosh...right sure. =)
maybe did you like to write little next?

ok well awsome update first of all! and please update!

AW what a good chapter please keep going. I love it.

Actually I think this is a good ending. You should end it here and have the sequel as a separate story. Unless you were already planning on doing that and I'm just having a blonde moment :D

Anyway, this was so sad. But nice.

Sorry this is short, I have to go to work. Just as the "perfect" start to the morning. *sarcasm*

one word,...UPDATE!

Does he love her!?!??!!??!?! (great again! ^_-)

You had better update, girl!

sorry this is short, i really have to go to work... great work, can't wait for more.

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Oh yeah. You had better not bother with that bullet proof vest, because I swear to God if you don't update I will strangle you!

Oh, and I suppose I may have mentioned this before, but I don't care... I LOVE DRACULA!

Please don't hurt Atrum. Please?

UPDATE SOON! Bloody cliffhangers... Gah!

OMG u r pure evil!! y did u leave it like that, thats crazy! I knew Stefan was evil! A..sry im going crazy, continue i love this story :) and make Van Helsing happy, i breaks my heart to see him sad :P

WHO APPEARED!?!?!?!!??!?!?