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| Mara Jade Jedi 2006-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseVery poignant and moving. I like how you've left it open to us to decide who 'he' is. You painted a nice, strong, picture, particularly at the end - i could see her painting on the smile. Well done! (I also liked the typo in the AN - Jock O'Neill :D) |
| Natters 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abusewow! beautifully written |
| SG1-Fanfic 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abusePowerful. |