Such a great S/E fic!
You really have great talent!
I espcially liked chapter 18 Breathless
and I smiled while reading the whole story!
I know it has been a long time since you updated anything new to FF but it would be awesome if you would write a sequel!xD

that was just awesome, the way u played with words & all.. the last part was extremely cool...checkmate..awesome! i totally loved ur story. out of the 10s and 100s of stories i've read, only 3 have intrigued me, 1 of them was urs. ^_^ u rock!!

well, i AM kinda confused but i think usagi's trapped ina time warp. O.o sorry..i watch too many action/epic movies . but ur story's really great!it's 1 of the 3 stories i've completely loved till now

^_^ i'm so excited...u've doing an amazing job . i'll deffinately have 2 chack out ur other stories when i'm done with this one. i just can't wait till serenity actually let's go of her fears. :-< i wish it would happen faster but that would take all the xcitment out of it. so i think that means this is amazingly perfect!

this story is more than enough for me to click on the next button! can't wait 2 c what happens! WOOHO O.o i'm just excited

This was cute! Very cute, indeed. Very well written. It could do with some edits because your words sometimes missed a letter or two, but other than that I found myself unable to tear away. Good job!

I've just started this story and I love it already. All of your works are beautiful. I just wanted to say something about the reviewer that disliked the way Serenity is acting.

I have a mild case of Haphephobia. If someone touches me without warning me first, I freak out. I have had panic attacks before. I'm better now, but the feeling of someone touching me without my pior consent is uncomfortable.

I really like the way you portray Serenity. It fits with the shock that a person would go through after an experiance like rape. It's a mental scar that takes time to heal.

Anyways, I would like to say great job, and continue the good work.

I actually created an account especially to write this review. Because I wanted to say that your story is very touching. It really moved me and to the ones who were reproaching you the fact that Serenity's reactions sounded "excessive", I must say that I disagree. I'm suffering from Haphephobia myself and Serenity's reactions were not excessive at all, they were pretty normal for someone suffering of this phobia.

I was really moved by this fanfiction. Keep it up!

This story was just too great! I loved it. I wished it had been 'M' rated though. I could just see how intense some chapters would have been if all the work Endymion had put into making Serenity feel comfortable, gaining her trust, and helping her to touch him and be touched again had led to some love making. Of course it did lead to that, I just wish that we could have seen it. I mean the last chapter 'breathless' was great at the end. Well teh whole chapter was great, but I liked the end when Endymion just couldn't hold back his emotions anymore. It was very well done and seriously had me wishing that I could have read more. (I don't suppose you have a deleted scene that would give up that scene, do you? *just kiding*) Anyway I love the whole link between them too. That was very well done. It had the right reactions from both of them. I say so because I recently read a fiction on here that had the connection/link between them that was mentioned, but otherwise none existant. There were a few times that Usagi (that was the name used in that story, you know since it could have Serena) had been seriously injured and other times she had been close to death and Mamoru? Darien had no reaction at all. I felt like he should have been just as hurt as her or so grieved that his mind wouldn't have been able to handle it and comletely shut down or just snapped and broke. The way you had him react in your story was just great. I loved every bit of it. His reactions were so intense and believeble and just...right! Oh I also loved how you worded the story. It was very well written and obviously kept me interested.
Anyway again this was great story. It earned a spot on my favorites list. Thanks for writing it. =)

this story is great, u did an amzaing job.

I ABSOLUTLY LOVED YOUR STORY! PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ WTITE A SEQUEL! IT WOULD BE GREAT! PLZ MESSAGE ME IF U DECIDE 2 DO SO!

a couple grammar mistakes but they're all minor ones and the plot is developing quite nicely

that was so cute. i adore this story =D
keep it uup

i loved this story! It's one of my fav!!

you love cliffhangers huh? sorry for filling your comments space, but this story compels me to comment, its so good! INTENSE!