Aah, poor Daisuke. Love how you presented the infidelity though, and the time jargon was great I thought. Totally made sense. I'm switching with every chapter who I want her to be with. Ha. For this one, definitely Takeru...

You always put a lot of effort into your work, it's great. Anyway, I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I love how you wrote the angst of Takeru in the beginning and the run in with Hikari on the bridge. Lovely writing as always! Also, the little addition of Mimi and Yamato was cute. :)

Keep updating, this is insanely great reading.

And yeah, I get that when I'm trying to sound deep or smart, the more I read what I've written, the more holes I can poke in all my amazing logic. When I read the time jargon it was in a nerdy scientist voice so it was actually rather cute.


gogo power updates!

i hope you find inspiration to continue with the chapters to come. ha, that sounded like a weird fortune cookie proverb. but with that strange remark, i sincerely hope this rare spark of enlightenment will continue. this is a truly fascinating story, not unlike the select few you come across once every solar eclipse.

ok, maybe not that long but this story works its way slowly, but delightfully, through a reader like myself.

perhaps one day, with more fics like this, it will generate something in me to one day be a writer again.

good luck cranking out the next chapters. i am earnest in my comment above.

this is a beautiful story. looking forward to reading the rest.

I melted into a puddle of goo. It was so wrong and right at the same time. It was as if all the UST they had finally exploded on them...and geez it was good.

What happens next is what takes my interest now. And Hikari, god Hikari, she's just soo...herself. XD Gaah, my reviews suck but your story doesn't don't worry. You might as well enjoy Pied Piper's work, she's very good herself.

I bet Morgan Freemon must love his Digimon. >:3

i freaking love this story porbably cause you make the reader think alot of it through to get the point of the chapters and it just makes the story more enjoyable. keep up the great work

This chapter was great.

This has to be the BEST Takari I've ever read. Seriously. They're so perfect for each other here, I wish they could just get together now... but all these obstacles! D:

I DO love how you put so much research into this story. I've studied Journey To The West for school before and I was glad that you actually bothered to research for all these details. :)

Great chapter and update soon!

*whistles* seems Kari is only denying her real feelings for Takeru, I mean the way they kissed in the bathroom oh boy a bit more and they would have ended making love there XD

Good thing they waited and now they're comfy on TK's apartment ^^

This was a brilliant chapter. BRILLIANT! :D You had me hooked with every word of it. Takeru's characterization was perfect. I really felt so sorry for him and the loss he must feel. And Daisuke... I'm so sick of love triangle stories where either one of the guys must be a jerk. Daisuke and Takeru are both so human here, you feel sorry for both of them no matter which couple you ship. It's great. :D

I'm just a little confused as to who Natsuko was talking to when she said Obake-sama. Could you explain that? :P

You're both excited and scared for the next chapter? That's making me look forward to it even more...

Update soon!! :D

Thank you for updating. regardless of the fact i am constantly adding stories to my favorites list, it hasn't seen an update in nearly a year.

As I've said before, you write angst well. Its not overly dramatic.

Takeru sure is taking it hard, I wonder how Hikari can be so clueless about that she is the reason Takeru is hurt? also I noticed she got jealous that TK came accompanied by that girl Chiyo, and then look at the girl, so comfy with Koushirou, with friends like that who needs enemies o.o

Yey, mystical homeless ladies are awesome!

I love your take on the Digimon characters when facing mature or real life situations (also the fact that you don't ignore they are Japanese), it's just...I love your writing.

How am I just finding this? I've always had a secret love affair with Digimon, especially and Takeru and Hikari.

I'm hooked on this story, please continue! Your writing style flows well and any sentence mistakes are few and far between. You portray confusion and sadness without the overly emotional ** that I can't seem to get into.


good stuff

I'm glad I remembered to read the latest chapter of this. I can't help but want Daisuke to win Hikari in the end, you've made him very endearing in this story. But that pairing has always sort of disturbed me, his likeness to her brother and all. :|