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AdrienneMichelleHudgens
2008-08-04
ch 6,
abusePoor, poor Maddie. Esteban too.
Julie
2008-04-09
ch 6, anon.
abuseOMGSH!
:D
you story is amazing!
:D
keep going.
I want to know what happens on this walk.
Orange Socks and Polka Dots
2007-02-20
ch 6,
abuseI like it. =)
Alone in the Solitude of Te...
2007-01-10
ch 6,
abuseOkay, five words: You had better tell me. EVERYTHING! This chick's (You know, fiance. blah) name, address, phone number, email address, criminal record, I want it all. Does she have any weaknesses? Never mind. I'll find out myself.

Anyway, yeah. Great story. And if you make that woman lovable, I'll probably cry. lol. Keep writing, can't wait for more!
Aeris Tiniel Mirime
2006-12-15
ch 6,
abuseAhh, I feel so sorry for them! The awkwardness of that whole situation is just killing me! But you also give some nice comic relief through Moseby and especially London. This was another great chapter, as always. Oh, and thanks for your latest review on "E.E." =)
MushLover92
2006-10-11
ch 6, anon.
abuseSo sad! Esteban must not get married!! He must be with Maddie!! I would feel bad for his finace, though. Well, she'll just have to find someone else. I am loving this story. Keep updating!
Purple Rhapsody
2006-10-10
ch 6,
abuseAw cute chapter! Denial, denial, Maddie and Esteban! Sigh. But that's what the conflict is for, isn't it. Can't wait to see what will happen next: "Will he get married? Will he get married and divorced? Will he get married at all?!"...Continued in the following edition! Never mind that I answered my own question...;)
Update soon!
~Purple Rhapsody~
Moviefan18
2006-10-10
ch 6,
abuseWONDERFUL,as usual... ; D
SolidGoldHeart
2006-10-09
ch 6,
abuse*blinks* It's been forever! You owe us quick updates! Anyways, love the story! keep it up!
EvilFaerie17
2006-10-09
ch 6,
abuseyay! another chapter! i liked it, but i wish that it was a bit longer... o well, i think that it was done really good! i really like this story, so please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!! (the suspense is killing me!) hehe. well, take your time and everything, but please in spite of that, update soon!

EvilFaerie17
captain lyd
2006-10-09
ch 6,
abuseYay! another chapter!

This was really cute, "Mr. Ramirez."
lol, I can't imagine Maddie calling him that!

and the London saying 'I know he's cute and all...'

that was adorable.

I loved this way much, and please continue to update!

-captain lyd

(Chaperon...lol)
Mari
2006-10-05
ch 5, anon.
abuseYAY!! another great story and i ant wait till u update
MElover3
2006-09-28
ch 5, anon.
abusePLEASE Update soon! I love this story. It's one of the rare Maddie/Esteban fics here!
Elizabeth Winters
2006-09-12
ch 5,
abuselove it please keep writing!
Moviefan18
2006-09-10
ch 5,
abuseYou wanna know what i think?1 word:FINALLY!Not only did you updated,i got my comp. fixed(...*sighs*once again!)i can't wait for the next chapter!; D
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