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| julsus 2007-05-19 ch 2,  | abuseI like the difference, yet also the connection of these two chapters. Booth being a little squinty. His love for his son. And his worry that he hadn't lived up to his father's expectations. Loved it all. |
| Bailadora 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAww. "You're a plane squint" that's so cute! I can just picture her trying that one out! |
| resa53 2007-04-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseI've been working my way through your fic and must say I'm enjoying it all immensely. I particularly like this little series and would like to encourage you to continue. This is a unique approach and I would love to read more. Thanks |
| simbagirl 2006-09-26 ch 2, | abuseNice. Real nice. Update? |
| dddynamite 2006-09-19 ch 2, | abuseI loved it a very well writen chap! |
| BBXFan 2006-09-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this glimpse into Booth's past! To truly understand a character you have to know where they've been. This is a plausible and perfect scenerio that goes a long way in explaining the man that Seeley has become. Great story! Can't wait to read more! |
| zelda49 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseAnother well-written chapter--I could even feel the goosebumps forming on my arms. And though I was a Navy girl, when Booth's father said "Rangers lead the way", I was so into the sotry I blurted out "All the way!" Nicely done :D |
| zelda49 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAH! This was great! You have managed to combine two of my favorite things--Booth and jets--in a beautifully written piece. It's nice to know, too, that I'm not the only "plane squint" in the area ;) |
| artigiano 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abusewow! that was so good! please update soon! |
| BonesDBchippie 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseCariad, MAN! I bet those fingers were just'a flying across that keyboard! I'm LOV'N this PRE-Pack'n imagination!! THIS ONE...Was JUST as wonderful! What a different feel! TOTALLY LOV'D how you brought out the relationship with Booth and his dad! Not a indepth contact we as readers often see and this was BEAUTIFULLY DONE!! LOOKING forward to MORE...when you return...UGH> When was that?...I don't think I can wait that long! HAVE FUN! and SAFE TRAVELS!! ~G :D |
| mendenbar 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseWow! I can see it now. What a vivid word picture you have created. Question, as a sniper Booth must have better than average vision - except for the one that needs glasses, my kids all have 20/10 and 20/15 vision, referred to as pilot's eyes and sniper's eyes, so what eye problem could Seeley possibly have that would keep him from being a pilot but not from being a sniper? Just curious. He doesn't seem to wear contacts and couldn't in the field anyway. |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseAw, I could so see that happening. I love this series, it's well written and very in character! Ava |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuse"You're a plane squint." hehe, I so wish they'd use that in the show! Ava |
| goldpiece 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseCariad, as always, this is a wonderful piece. You are so good at protraying the emotions someone is feeling. Beautifully written. My family has a lot of military..my brother is a marine, so I love these pieces that connect well to that aspect of Booth's past. Unfortunately, I'm not good at writing them myself. |
| Howdylynn 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseI really love this fic. There's nothing else like it out there. You have such amazing talent to achieve such accurate characterizations. Wow. |