That was very cute! I love how Kyo really cares deeply for Tohru, even if he does have a not-so-obvious way of displaying his affection. Very cute. :D

kawaii,yet unfinished.way too unfinished. i think there should be a bit more to it,ya kno? not just stop right in the begginging! lol.

Aw! cute! i loved it! ;p

You portrayed Kyo perfectly.

that was interest but a good story!

This was cute and funny. You write really good oneshots and with my favorite pairing too. Kyo and Tohru forever!