*Sniffles* So sad...! You sometimes wonder if this really is what he's thinking, even if it's for the briefest moment. (Which is why I'm sincerely hoping that Katara's forgiving nature post-betrayal and an acceptance into the "family" will be what saves him, but that's beside the point.) You write such nice poetry! :D

Really nice poetry, I am impressed.

brilliant, well done. I have no suugestions yet but I will let you know if I think of any, Post soon

Once again, great job.

Wow, very beautiful.