soo sad i love ti x

Wow. I could never make such a sad story that good. I mean, I'm good at dark, gloomy moments, but not like that! Great job! So, who was the boy? There weren't really any hints as to who he was.

no...
that was really beautiful...thank you

not yet...
not yet..

oh great, now i'm all weepy...but nonetheless...it was bloody brilliant! that was a wounderful start...please say you might expand on this at least?

Aw, that was a sweet and sad little fic. I so get how quotes from movies, books, shows etc. can inspire a fic.

*faves*

Awesome job, Lone. Who was the Head Boy, though? Blaise? Hm?

And make your half of the profile smaller! It takes up too much space, lol. :D

-Stranger

...That is one depressing fic. (pause) *_* I have the urge to go write an angst fic. Excuse me. (leaves)

Sirius: -_-...

(comes back) Er, it didn't work out. Ended up making a happy ending. Ahem. Anyway, I really liked this story, even if it was short. I think it was three-star material, really.

I'm gonna cry!! That was beautiful!! It is definitely five-star material. If I were judging the writing olympics, I'd give you the gold medal!! I loved it!!

*five*sniff***sob*stars*sniff* Wha!

i love it so much

I have to say I loved this one. Though I'm not sure who the boy was, I definately know who the girl was. But I like to think the boy was Draco, simply because I love him :) Lol. Anyway Well done. And I read in your bio that you like Oliver Hermione Fics, and if you're interested, I do have one. It's called 'A Lifetime for Four Months' and it's sad. So if you want, check it out and let me know what you think :) I haven't gotten much feedback on my one shots, so, I'd love to know what you think about that one!
Sway

Lovely! x

Agh! The ending was tragic, it's no wonder that they'd always say those words to each other. If they progressed more than they dared to, the end result would be...even more than it is now.

How can you say this wasn't five-star material? It was beautiful! It was so sad, how could you end it that way?! Keep up the awesome work!