I had always wondered about this shall we say "forgotten chapter" of DBZ as well! Thank you for giving your idea shape!

Hello I really enjoyed this story,Im sorry Im really terrible at reviewing but there is something I want to ask you since it has been bugging me for quite a while.In most of the Piccole fics Ive read Piccolo refers to Piccolo Daimao as his "sire"(I know what that means)I wanted to know if he calls him that in the english dub or somewhere else or if this is some kind of fanon thing.Im from Germany and in the german dub Piccolo always refers to him as his "father"

Thank you in advance

It was all good enough until the end... which was great! I actually laughed out loud when he was complaining about Kami while referring to him as God and then asking "Does he have to know everything?"

The dialogue in this story was really good.

Very cool! I never considered why Piccolo didn't go to hell when he was killed by Nappa before. It was very in-character, and the love he had for Gohan was very sweet. Nice job!

the best one shot i have read

amazing fanfic. piccolo is my favorite charicter and i loved how you showed his internal struggle in this.

keep up the great writing.

awesome

continue.

Wow, this was amazing. You got Piccolo's character perfectly in this and not only that, you didn't resort to any fluffy cliches either! It ended on the perfect note with Piccolo going off to get even stronger than ever! He's one of the coolest characters in DBZ and it's a terrible shame he was glossed over after the Cell Saga in favor of Vegeta as the main anti-hero(blech).

this is AWSOME. it's written in a very different stlye compared to the other piccolo-dying-for-gohan fics. it's kinda hard to explain really. i also love the argument between kami and emna. it's really well put forth on both sides

I've never read a better Piccolo story. This was beyond good, it was excellent. The plot, dialogue, story, and emotions in this piece were astounding and I'm very very impressed.

"And then I realized something big: if I had a choice, between the warmth I felt thanks to Gohan, or the thrill I'd feel for killing Son… I'd choose Gohan.

No contest."

This was my favorite part of the story and I think you handled Piccolo's transformation from the Demon King very well.

Thanks!

he ended up in heaven anyway in the end, didn't he? in dbgt.

Aw cute story I loved it! I did always wonder why Pic got to train!

Impressive.

Excellent writing style, interesting development, open for sequel, great work.

Keep writing you're a natural

ZIM