Very cool! I never considered why Piccolo didn't go to hell when he was killed by Nappa before. It was very in-character, and the love he had for Gohan was very sweet. Nice job!

the best one shot i have read

amazing fanfic. piccolo is my favorite charicter and i loved how you showed his internal struggle in this.

keep up the great writing.

awesome

continue.

Wow, this was amazing. You got Piccolo's character perfectly in this and not only that, you didn't resort to any fluffy cliches either! It ended on the perfect note with Piccolo going off to get even stronger than ever! He's one of the coolest characters in DBZ and it's a terrible shame he was glossed over after the Cell Saga in favor of Vegeta as the main anti-hero(blech).

this is AWSOME. it's written in a very different stlye compared to the other piccolo-dying-for-gohan fics. it's kinda hard to explain really. i also love the argument between kami and emna. it's really well put forth on both sides

I've never read a better Piccolo story. This was beyond good, it was excellent. The plot, dialogue, story, and emotions in this piece were astounding and I'm very very impressed.

"And then I realized something big: if I had a choice, between the warmth I felt thanks to Gohan, or the thrill I'd feel for killing Son… I'd choose Gohan.

No contest."

This was my favorite part of the story and I think you handled Piccolo's transformation from the Demon King very well.

Thanks!

he ended up in heaven anyway in the end, didn't he? in dbgt.

Aw cute story I loved it! I did always wonder why Pic got to train!

Impressive.

Excellent writing style, interesting development, open for sequel, great work.

Keep writing you're a natural

ZIM

Quite nice. Your portrayal of Piccolo was very convincing: just the right mixture of intelligence, cunning, anger, and feeling. I also liked the character interactions.

Brilliant! I think this is one of the better fics I've read that fetured Piccolo. I LOVE how you personify him. Excellent all they way. I do hope you write more in future. It would be a shame to let such talent go to waste.

Kudos

Heh. I LOVE this story! It is written very well, and you manage to express Piccolo in emotional turmoil with out getting out of character. KUDOS for you! You're going on my author alert list. ;-D

Very well-written! Piccolo was absolutely in character, and I could see him getting his reward, exactly as you wrote it. I could see Kami taking up for Piccolo like this, even though he and Piccolo didn't get along. I also like how you brought out Enma Daiou and how he could be. Again, well done!