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Blue_Autumn_Sky 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon.	abusewow...this is better than sliced bread! You've tapped into Slade's character perfectly. And the depth and pyschology of this piece is astonishing. What are you doing writing fanfiction when you could probably write the next great novel. Don't take that as incentive to stop though.
Spicycute199 2007-12-28 ch 1,	abuseWow thats very Deep, I don't know what it means though.
Dlvvanzor 2007-03-29 ch 1,	abuseWow. The way you wrote Slade is so formal and intelligent... it sounds like how I imagine him thinking. It really makes him seem like a person behind the mask. Not like he doesn't have the emotions but like he analizes them and then doesn't show them. This is a whole new perspective of the relationship between Slade and Robin. I'd never thought of the fact that Slade is a father without kids and Robin is a kid without a dad, that in a perfect world, like you said, it would work out. This was a really good fanfic. Made me think.
TunakTunakTun 2007-01-28 ch 2, anon.	abuse'EY! You said you'd be updating your stories more...what happened, chica? Where'd you go? And it's the New Year! Resolutions! RESOLUTIONS! Number one being to update more. ;)
Alonein-Darkness7 2007-01-20 ch 2,	abuseIt's alright, we all make mistakes and at least you know that Slade had a wife in the first place; most people who write fanfics don't know anything about the characters they use. Again, this was very well written and I could tell you put a lot of thought and work into it. Great job!
Alonein-Darkness7 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI liked it, you did a really good job with keeping them both incharacter while showing some of the more 'human' side of Slade. Excellent job.
PenetratingBlackEyes 2007-01-17 ch 2,	abuseI'm speechless. It was...perfect. adds to favorites
Clovergirl22 2006-12-30 ch 2,	abuseThis story is wonderful, I must also comment about your style because it shapes Slade and Robin into "people" rather than cartoon characters from the show. I love SLade's povs and unlike some writers you have his Character right on target. I love how you describe everything and his thoughts. Hope to see more! Love. It. All. -Clovergirl22
Atromiti 2006-12-10 ch 2,	abuseIt's Addie, not Abbie. But nice work. :)
Shunatsu 2006-12-03 ch 2,	abuseThis is INCREDIBLE! OMG! I can't believe it! It's awesome! I mean it, AWESOME~!
Tsuki the Avenger 2006-12-01 ch 1,	abuse"Oh dear child, if only I had the time to twist this knife with the cruelty it deserves..." Wow, this was a truly awesome fic. I've been haunting for hours a day looking for a great Slade/Robin obsession/psychological story, and this was GREAT. Slade was beautifully dark and Robin was a nice foil. All in all, I loved it. You blended comic-verse with the cartoon WONDERFULLY. Lovely, lovely job. Much love, Tsuki - "You might want to rethink the yellow cape." - Batman, Dark Victory
WeLOVEAnsuz 2006-08-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseAnother great fic! I've only ever seen Slade in the Teen Titans show, but you made him even cooler/creepier here. :D Oh, and, can you please continue Among Assassins? PLZ! We thought you had died, but now that you're back you can continue, and continue on your others...we love you/your fics. ^_^
Atromiti 2006-08-01 ch 1,	abuseThe dynamic you explored in this piece is fascinating. Your writing style is lovely...some sentences were truly inspired. There are a couple things I'd like to bring to your attention, however: Firstly, while this story is clearly meant to be in present tense, you occasionally slip into past tense. Also, you refer to Slade in first person and Robin in second person...but once or twice, Robin is referred to in regular old third person. Here is a sentence that contains both those minor errors: " But he would not allow this victory. I knew he would not countenance such an insult. " No big deal, of course...and good job with this piece.
Dark Austral 2006-07-31 ch 1,	abuseNice insight on Slade's part. I liked how you wrote that fathers bury sons and wives cripple husbands, that really described Slade's mentality. And Robin's different tone was a great balance to it.
miss capulet 2006-07-30 ch 1,	abuseWow. Possibly the best Slade fic I've ever read. This was...eerie and...the dialogue was amazing and...the last line was perfect. I adore the way you portray these two...you are very, very talented. Bravo. This is going in my favorites.

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