Reviews for Little Boy Lost

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Sue1313 2008-07-23 ch 4,	abuseLoved this story. Reid was so good with Bailey and just so thoughtful of him. Morgan was cute with his guilt and I loved this quote from Winnie the Pooh. It was just perfect. Gideon was the perfect father watching over him.
whitelighter013 2008-07-21 ch 4,	abusethis i promise you, is one of the few fan fictions that no matter how many times i read will always be my favorite. thank you so much. i am a huge fan of yours.
CSIFanz 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseHave anyone of u guys noticed that whenever theres kidnapping or etc. Reid is the one who always gets kidnapped?
Addicted Archangel 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abusePkay, right now I hate the fact that I'm dead tired and have to go to bed.. GOD! That's so exciting! Great start, great story and your profile was awesome. Love it, love it, love it. You will have all your stories read in no time, girl! I'll read the next chap tomorrow! /AA (Um.. I tried to lick my elbow. ashamed)
Reidluver 2008-04-27 ch 4,	abuseHave I mentioned how great this story is? Anyway, the relationship between Reid and Bailey is very sweet, and I luv how he was so serious about wanting Reid to have his own teddy bear. The whole walking up his chest and then touching Reid's chin was really cute as well, something I would like to see in canon. So, again, I luv it, and later on I'm going to review your sequel, but it might not be for a little while, because I have to go do my homework, and I already 'wasted' time reading it earlier today, having forgot about the prequel, but I promise that I will review every chapter, because it truly is a shame for a great work of art not to receive the amount of reviews it deserves.
Reidluver 2008-04-27 ch 3,	abuseAgain, a very well-written chapter. I must say, you did an excellent job at describing how Reid "slit" his wrist. Great job on including the whole point on how hard it is to actually draw blood. Many people think that it would be easy, but it's not. You think that making a cut big enough to draw blood wouldn't take much, but there is so much more to it than that.
Reidluver 2008-04-27 ch 2,	abuse"I'm so gone, I'm not even putting make-up on." HILARIOUS! ^_^ What was really sweet was that Reid took the beatings from "Tom" just to stop him from killing Bailey. That is so sweet, and I completely understand. For some reason, children are always such a weak spot, and Reid is just the type of person who would care more about the child than himself.
Reidluver 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseHello! I just glanced over your reviews, and I am ashamed to know that I haven't reviewed for this story yet! I think that I read it before I got an account, and then I just added it to my favorites and forgot to review! Anyway, I've got to say that I've read this and the sequel, and I've decided to reread it for fun because it's written so well. THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! I see that you said English isn't your primary language, but in all honesty, your grammer, spelling, and formatting are WAY better than probably 45% of the English-speaking people on here. I really commend you on that. You capture everyone's personatlities perfectly, and I especially luv your perfect touch of humor with Morgan and Garcia (esp. the last one for this chapter) and you just are amazing! You are truly my inspiration for my CM fics, and you just astound me with each chapter. I really was amazed by the in depth thinking and planning that had to go behind your sequel with the whole anagrams and stuff. I am greatly saddened by the fact that you only have 75 reviews! A great work of art like this should have more! Okay, I'll stop geeking out now. ^_^
Anasia 2008-03-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseOh my, this is such a cute story! Serious, as well, but it's such a nice read. Ha. Read, Reid...what a pun :) I liked the storyline, first of all. It's refreshing to read a fic like this that doesn't revolve around just one member of the team being horrifically tortured for twenty chapters, and only barely surviving the ordeal. You presented the case the way an actual episode does, so kudos to you for that. I very much enjoy a story that is planned out and shows clear evidence of research. Much more favourable than the CM fics you usually read here, with the authour garnering random facts and spurts of intellect together to make the story seem smarter than it actually is. And I adored the relationship Reid had with Bailey. It was a believable one, formed from a common experience, if that makes sense. It gave the story a light-hearted ending, better than most where Reid or whoever lives out the rest of their days in a psych ward. The part where Reid cut his own wrist in order to use blood for lubrication was very well-written. You conveyed a realistic action; showing that it is harder than thought to cut your own wrist open was very wise. People should know that it isn't like sliding a hot knife into butter. The way you portrayed the BAU team's relationships was very well done. You didn't stray far from the canon, and that was nice. Too often people make Gideon or Hotch more light-hearted than they actually are in the show, and that can kind of ruin the story. Readers frequent this category because they want to see the characters as themselves and not hyper-active agents. All in all I very much enjoyed your story. I admit it's not the first time I've read it; it's more like the fourth or fifth. Same with all of your stories, actually...I began to regret not having reviewed any of them. So now, since I have nothing to do and I feel like writing a lot, I'm finally doing what I've put off for so long. So yes. Thank you for writing this. Uhm...WAIT! I meant to also comment on your language and grammar. Both of which are superb. I envy multilinguists like yourself. And I'd never have guessed English wasn't in your top three languages; I only know cause you make a point of saying it in every story haha. So don't be nervous of any mistakes you may make; people will assume you're just another dense american or canadian, when really you're a smart non-English person :) Have a good night
cassy7 2008-03-13 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis was a great story. It had a great case to investigate and the emotions equally fit everyone. The interaction between reid and bailey were very piogant and sweet. I really enjoyed reading and look forward to finding more of your work.
jess 2007-12-08 ch 4, anon.	abuseoh, i love you! that was so sweet, especially the teddy-bear part! can't you just see morgan, jj, hotch and elle arguing over which one would be best? ^_^ and reid was so brave and awesome! he hust himself for a good cause... all his team members got to worry about him and love him! yay! thank you so much. HUG
Dani 2007-11-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis was excellent...hard to believe that you are not American...you got all the nuances down pat. AND, more impressive, you have the law inforcement procedures down perfectly. Thank you for the story, I look forward to reading more of your work.
nachtigall 2007-11-01 ch 4,	abusethats a very cute story. I like this and read this a few times. thx for it!
Angela 2007-10-29 ch 4, anon.	abuseThank you for writing a smart, competent, and brave Reid. I love angsty stories where someone is in danger, but sometimes people go to far and write characters as helpless and weak. I could see Reid acting like this in an episode.
mog 2007-09-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseLove the teddy bear! Now I'm off to read the sequel. Still awed by your command of English.

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