The poor wood chipper...

Some spelling errors like diarrhoea and Pikachu. It would be better if you actually put in more effort into writing. Not exactly what I would call a good piece of work.

That...is what you call a fic? That was trash! Talking about Brock and his no-eye-ness, and Pikachu gets thrown into a wood chipper! This is...Just...Indescribable.

Oh poor Pikachu! I'm sure the whole gang would be so sad, and just think of how hard it will be to collect all of him to be buried!

*sweatdrop*
some...humour...I suppose...
but despite it being offending, I'd love to read the next chapter! (I'm deranged, aren't I?)

~dreamz

I suggest you learn to spell "pikachu" before you try writing about one.

Also, what is the point of this? I admit freely pikachu is my favorite pokemon, but even if I didn't like the little squirrel, I still wouldn't like this. Short, utterly pointless, unfunny and devoid of any plot whatsoever. If you really want to kill off a pikachu, craft an actual PLOT around it. Snuff fic for the sake of snuff fic is just stupid.

You fail.

-Pink Parka Girl