Wanted to give you a heads up. A review of your fanfic and link to it has been posted on matt-trakker DOT com in their fanfic section. Hopefully a muse will come and inspire a few more vignettes someday. :)

"Things To Do In Denver": I liked how you described the office of Matt's foundation. Nicely descriptive without going overboard and boring the reader. I agree, for that kind of foundation, you wouldn't need or want a big office. The money should go to the charities and projects.

"The Cowboy Way": Yeah, Dusty is really happy, the-world-is-a-fun-place kind of guy. A definite morale-booster for any team. :)

"Rock'n'Roll Dreams": I thought for a moment the girl near the stage was going to be Gloria. Considering you were using it as an example to Matt why he should look closer at this person, it was best it wasn't. Gloria would have been able to take care of herself. ;)

"Schools Out": "I'll kill him." HAH! I really liked this vignette for the easy way the dialogue flowed. Very good job!

"Just a Girl": The others Matt had known, or Duane helped him find. I like how you changed this for Gloria, and it fits with the story you have been doing. It's not a coincidence, it's logical for the story. The descriptions of their sparring are very nice, and I love how you had Matt aiming a punch at what he thought was a weakness, and then Gloria nailed him. Go Gloria!

This is really great.
I'm hoping your continue this.

Its good to see a new addition to this series! And its good to see that you finally brought in Gloria. I was wondering when she was going to show up! Now, how about bringing her onto the team!

Well, Hondo's onboard. Now its time to get a few others in, such as Gloria, Dusty, and Alex. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the team is recruited.

I had a hunch when I saw the title who Matt was going to look into recruting next! Very nice job. Now, lets see who's next: Gloria? Alex? Hondo?

And, another member of the team has been recruited. Two down, several more to go. I am looking especially forward to the recruitment of Alex Sector and Gloria. Those two should be VERY interesting!

A very interesting start to a solid friendship.