A great story. Very good.

Wow - quite the _creative_ piece. I very much enjoyed it. Well written, technically (a rarity in fanfiction) and plot/messagewise. Very consistent in your theme. Seemed closer to a real episode than most. May be lacking a little where the main characters go, but then again that might have detracted from the focus... My compliments.

Oh, that was amazing... truly awesome. I love Star Trek, and this was the most compelling and beautifully written Trek fic I've seen on this site! Awesome! What a great concept, too... and you stay really true to the characters. Amazing work!

Very nicely written. Engaging story, as well. You've captured all the personalities really well, and I particularly liked some of the descriptive passages (the atmosphere of the Sphere, for example).

Oddly, I couldn't help wondering if Morgan had to try to captain a starship dressed in one of those ridiculous mini-dresses the female crew members wore in the original series. :-)

I also wondered why she referred to Kirk as "sir" when they seemed to be on equal footing as starship captains. (Maybe it has to do with class of starship or seniority or something? I'm not a real pro on Star Trek details, so I don't know.)

A very entertaining read! I really enjoy your writing style.

You can consider this two reviews in one, because I also must mention how much I was enjoying your (sadly defunct) Terminator story "Infinity". (I'm guessing you're the same E Kelly, the writing style is very much the same.) It was very good. When it disappeared, I decided to check and see if you had stories in any other fandom I was familiar with.

The Borg met Kirk, and he tore their little ship apart. Great story.

Excellent pacing and descriptions. I liked the battle scenes, even if they were a little unrealistic. This was a good quote: "Again, her question confounded him. How could she not understand? And she didn't - she looked at him with ...innocence? No, innocence was fertile ground; this
look was a void, a ravenous, hungry void. Inwardly, he instinctively recoiled from that hunger."
However, there were a few things that I thougth I would note. When the borg queen tells Noonian Soong that he is welcome to ask any borg he may find walking around questions about their status as a cyborg; wouldn't she mention that /then/ they were a collective consiousness and didn't respond to 'irrelevent' questions? Instead of telling him a little later. Also, near the end when Spock mentions that Dr Soong's work would probably have far reaching inplications, it seemed a little forced.

that was good.

I'd forgotten about this one, and how much I liked it. : )

nice story - creative and well written, smooth. my only complaint would be that there wasn't more of the enterprise crew, but still an entertaining read