FABULOUS

Very cute! I love it!

liked it. Hope to see more of this pairing. keep up the good work

Wonderful! You have the characters down!

Thank you for writing!

MA

Not crazy that you made Jackson out to be a jealous jerk, but good story.

I'm so glad that you wrote a Shep/Vala fic. I did notice how in The Pegasus Project how Shep kept looking over at Vala. I loved the episode, but it would've been great to see these two actually interact. Thanks for creating such a scene.

Witty dialogue. I loved the scrossover episode and it would have been nice to see this little John/Vala moment.

Ahh... this was cute... I was disappointed that in the episode Vala never really flirted with anyone... I expected at least Shep... maybe Lorne... McKay... you know Vala.

What a wonderful little story. I personally loved it! You can tell by the look John gave Vala in the ep last night that he was interested in her. Loved how Daniel asked Vala if she was talking about him. Definitley would love to see more John and Vala stories myself. Again wonderful story.

this is great! very funny. i can just see the two of them "just talking"...you capture Vala very well! she's definitely my favorite character on SG-1, i wish she'd show up in Atlantis more often. might there be more John/vala encounters, or is this a one-shot?

This was short and cute! I personally think now there should definitely be more John/Vala Fics. I absolutely love that they crossed the two shows together last night.