Your a great writer! And I hope you'll update soon!

I love the way you describe the scenery - but you're right - the chapter's a little short. Generally, when you end a chapter, something should have happened. Although, 'the night had awoken' seems pretty good. A lot depends unpon what you do next.

This looks to be a pretty good prologue, I can't say much more until I read the rest. However, 'I' always gets capitalised, even in the middle of a sentence. Grammar's just my pet peeve, that's all.