Loving the story so far!

I hope she gets off okay on that ship. Expcally with Jimmylegs after her.

This was great!
Can't wait to read more!
:D

I love this chapter!
This is great!

Dang...
Davy's harsh...
Gives me an idea...
But this is one heck of a great chapter!
And good job on getting Davy's accent right!
:)

Best chapter so far!
Wow...
I'm getting all excited!

Again, great chapter!
(sorry my reviews are so short)

As usual, Great chapter!

Exciting chapter!
It makes me want to read more of it!

Nice chapter!

This is really good!!
:)

Interesting...
I like it!
:)
Adding this one to my favorites!

I wonder what Tia Dalma is going to do to Jack when she finds out about what happened to Jessa.

Something tells me I've made a mistake... either that, or you've removed something from the fic so that the system believes I've already reviewed... o_0 Ah well. I know how to beat the system. ;)

Right off the bat I really like the title. Gives the reader the reassuring feeling that things are indeed in motion, and that the climax is ahead of us yet. The drama is building. ^.^
The description of Jimmylegs' voice is brilliant, reminded me of a snake the instant I read that line; gave me the chills and made me feel wet. His sarcasm at not having any threes is well-done. Shows off your grasp on the cruelty of his character. d^.^b
LOVE the line about nobility! :)

Heh, my neighbour and I have just resurrected our PotC marathon, and we watched DMC today. With it fresh in my mind, I have to say, your descriptions of the events in the movie (with your own delightful twist, of course ~.^) are really well-crafted.

I'm impressed with your ability to write Tia Dalma's accent. She's not an easy woman to write... or live with, as Captain Jack could tell you. ;D

All in all, very well done, Irish! :D Only a few typos that I could find, and I'd say your writing has certainly improved, along with a fair amount of style development. Very happy to have been able to read this again.

Keep writing, I'll keep reading. soupie ~.^

oh bugger. this can't be good. MORE CHAPTERS MUCH MORE CHAPTERS!

*gasp* what will ever happen?!? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! *dies*