Reviews for The Treasure of Captain Jack Sparrow
Kyrsea-The Horror Movie Lover 5/23/08 . chapter 10
Loving the story so far!

I hope she gets off okay on that ship. Expcally with Jimmylegs after her.
Flygon Pirate 5/9/08 . chapter 10
This was great!

Can't wait to read more!

:D
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 9
I love this chapter!

This is great!
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 8
Dang...

Davy's harsh...

Gives me an idea...

But this is one heck of a great chapter!

And good job on getting Davy's accent right!

:)
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 7
Best chapter so far!

Wow...

I'm getting all excited!
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 6
Again, great chapter!

(sorry my reviews are so short)
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 5
As usual, Great chapter!
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 4
Exciting chapter!

It makes me want to read more of it!
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 3
Nice chapter!
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 2
This is really good!

:)
Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 1
Interesting...

I like it!

:)

Adding this one to my favorites!
R. L. Ravenclaw 5/7/08 . chapter 10
I wonder what Tia Dalma is going to do to Jack when she finds out about what happened to Jessa.
theflyingscotswoman soupie 3/29/08 . chapter 10
Something tells me I've made a mistake... either that, or you've removed something from the fic so that the system believes I've already reviewed... o_0 Ah well. I know how to beat the system. ;)

Right off the bat I really like the title. Gives the reader the reassuring feeling that things are indeed in motion, and that the climax is ahead of us yet. The drama is building. .

The description of Jimmylegs' voice is brilliant, reminded me of a snake the instant I read that line; gave me the chills and made me feel wet. His sarcasm at not having any threes is well-done. Shows off your grasp on the cruelty of his character. d.b

LOVE the line about nobility! :)

Heh, my neighbour and I have just resurrected our PotC marathon, and we watched DMC today. With it fresh in my mind, I have to say, your descriptions of the events in the movie (with your own delightful twist, of course .) are really well-crafted.

I'm impressed with your ability to write Tia Dalma's accent. She's not an easy woman to write... or live with, as Captain Jack could tell you. ;D

All in all, very well done, Irish! :D Only a few typos that I could find, and I'd say your writing has certainly improved, along with a fair amount of style development. Very happy to have been able to read this again.

Keep writing, I'll keep reading. soupie .
degrees-of-rambling 9/7/07 . chapter 10
oh bugger. this can't be good. MORE CHAPTERS MUCH MORE CHAPTERS!
degrees-of-rambling 9/7/07 . chapter 4
*gasp* what will ever happen? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! *dies*
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