 Kyrsea-The Horror Movie Lover 2008-05-23 . chapter 10Loving the story so far!
I hope she gets off okay on that ship. Expcally with Jimmylegs after her. |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-09 . chapter 10This was great!
Can't wait to read more!
:D |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 9I love this chapter!
This is great! |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 8Dang...
Davy's harsh...
Gives me an idea...
But this is one heck of a great chapter!
And good job on getting Davy's accent right!
:) |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 7Best chapter so far!
Wow...
I'm getting all excited! |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 6Again, great chapter!
(sorry my reviews are so short) |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 5As usual, Great chapter! |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 4Exciting chapter!
It makes me want to read more of it! |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 3Nice chapter! |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 2This is really good!!
:) |
 Flygon Pirate 2008-05-08 . chapter 1Interesting...
I like it!
:)
Adding this one to my favorites! |
 Blackgrrl92 2008-05-07 . chapter 10I wonder what Tia Dalma is going to do to Jack when she finds out about what happened to Jessa. |
 theflyingscotswoman (soupie) 2008-03-29 . chapter 10 Something tells me I've made a mistake... either that, or you've removed something from the fic so that the system believes I've already reviewed... o_0 Ah well. I know how to beat the system. ;)
Right off the bat I really like the title. Gives the reader the reassuring feeling that things are indeed in motion, and that the climax is ahead of us yet. The drama is building. ^.^
The description of Jimmylegs' voice is brilliant, reminded me of a snake the instant I read that line; gave me the chills and made me feel wet. His sarcasm at not having any threes is well-done. Shows off your grasp on the cruelty of his character. d^.^b
LOVE the line about nobility! :)
Heh, my neighbour and I have just resurrected our PotC marathon, and we watched DMC today. With it fresh in my mind, I have to say, your descriptions of the events in the movie (with your own delightful twist, of course ~.^) are really well-crafted.
I'm impressed with your ability to write Tia Dalma's accent. She's not an easy woman to write... or live with, as Captain Jack could tell you. ;D
All in all, very well done, Irish! :D Only a few typos that I could find, and I'd say your writing has certainly improved, along with a fair amount of style development. Very happy to have been able to read this again.
Keep writing, I'll keep reading. soupie ~.^ |
 degrees-of-rambling 2007-09-07 . chapter 10oh bugger. this can't be good. MORE CHAPTERS MUCH MORE CHAPTERS! |
 degrees-of-rambling 2007-09-07 . chapter 4*gasp* what will ever happen?!? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! *dies* |