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| Reviews for The Treasure of Captain Jack Sparrow |
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   Kyrsea-The Horror Movie Lover 5/23/08 . chapter 10Loving the story so far! I hope she gets off okay on that ship. Expcally with Jimmylegs after her. |
| Flygon Pirate 5/9/08 . chapter 10 This was great! Can't wait to read more! :D |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 9 I love this chapter! This is great! |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 8 Dang... Davy's harsh... Gives me an idea... But this is one heck of a great chapter! And good job on getting Davy's accent right! :) |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 7 Best chapter so far! Wow... I'm getting all excited! |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 6 Again, great chapter! (sorry my reviews are so short) |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 5 As usual, Great chapter! |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 4 Exciting chapter! It makes me want to read more of it! |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 3 Nice chapter! |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 2 This is really good! :) |
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 1 Interesting... I like it! :) Adding this one to my favorites! |
| R. L. Ravenclaw 5/7/08 . chapter 10 I wonder what Tia Dalma is going to do to Jack when she finds out about what happened to Jessa. |
| theflyingscotswoman soupie 3/29/08 . chapter 10 Something tells me I've made a mistake... either that, or you've removed something from the fic so that the system believes I've already reviewed... o_0 Ah well. I know how to beat the system. ;) Right off the bat I really like the title. Gives the reader the reassuring feeling that things are indeed in motion, and that the climax is ahead of us yet. The drama is building. . The description of Jimmylegs' voice is brilliant, reminded me of a snake the instant I read that line; gave me the chills and made me feel wet. His sarcasm at not having any threes is well-done. Shows off your grasp on the cruelty of his character. d.b LOVE the line about nobility! :) Heh, my neighbour and I have just resurrected our PotC marathon, and we watched DMC today. With it fresh in my mind, I have to say, your descriptions of the events in the movie (with your own delightful twist, of course .) are really well-crafted. I'm impressed with your ability to write Tia Dalma's accent. She's not an easy woman to write... or live with, as Captain Jack could tell you. ;D All in all, very well done, Irish! :D Only a few typos that I could find, and I'd say your writing has certainly improved, along with a fair amount of style development. Very happy to have been able to read this again. Keep writing, I'll keep reading. soupie . |
| degrees-of-rambling 9/7/07 . chapter 10 oh bugger. this can't be good. MORE CHAPTERS MUCH MORE CHAPTERS! |
| degrees-of-rambling 9/7/07 . chapter 4 *gasp* what will ever happen? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! *dies* |
