|Reviews for The Treasure of Captain Jack Sparrow|
| Kyrsea-The Horror Movie Lover 5/23/08 . chapter 10
Loving the story so far!
I hope she gets off okay on that ship. Expcally with Jimmylegs after her.
| Flygon Pirate 5/9/08 . chapter 10
This was great!
Can't wait to read more!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 9
I love this chapter!
This is great!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 8
Gives me an idea...
But this is one heck of a great chapter!
And good job on getting Davy's accent right!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 7
Best chapter so far!
I'm getting all excited!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 6
Again, great chapter!
(sorry my reviews are so short)
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 5
As usual, Great chapter!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 4
It makes me want to read more of it!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 3
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 2
This is really good!
| Flygon Pirate 5/8/08 . chapter 1
I like it!
Adding this one to my favorites!
| R. L. Ravenclaw 5/7/08 . chapter 10
I wonder what Tia Dalma is going to do to Jack when she finds out about what happened to Jessa.
| theflyingscotswoman soupie 3/29/08 . chapter 10
Something tells me I've made a mistake... either that, or you've removed something from the fic so that the system believes I've already reviewed... o_0 Ah well. I know how to beat the system. ;)
Right off the bat I really like the title. Gives the reader the reassuring feeling that things are indeed in motion, and that the climax is ahead of us yet. The drama is building. .
The description of Jimmylegs' voice is brilliant, reminded me of a snake the instant I read that line; gave me the chills and made me feel wet. His sarcasm at not having any threes is well-done. Shows off your grasp on the cruelty of his character. d.b
LOVE the line about nobility! :)
Heh, my neighbour and I have just resurrected our PotC marathon, and we watched DMC today. With it fresh in my mind, I have to say, your descriptions of the events in the movie (with your own delightful twist, of course .) are really well-crafted.
I'm impressed with your ability to write Tia Dalma's accent. She's not an easy woman to write... or live with, as Captain Jack could tell you. ;D
All in all, very well done, Irish! :D Only a few typos that I could find, and I'd say your writing has certainly improved, along with a fair amount of style development. Very happy to have been able to read this again.
Keep writing, I'll keep reading. soupie .
| degrees-of-rambling 9/7/07 . chapter 10
oh bugger. this can't be good. MORE CHAPTERS MUCH MORE CHAPTERS!
| degrees-of-rambling 9/7/07 . chapter 4
*gasp* what will ever happen? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! *dies*