This is a highly interesting begining, now where's the rest of the story? I like your explination for how wizards interact with the Charter, it makes a lot of sense. GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON, please!

Hey, well from what i've read so far this is going to turn out to be a really good story. I've never seen a harrypotter/abhorsen crossover before, is this the only one?But anyways please update soon, i'll be waiting!

Pretty Interesting, I would love to see what you eventually were going to do with this. Would really like you to pick it up again but I doubt that would happen. Have a nice life :)

really like this story and hope to see more. please update soon

Hehehe... What now? I really like this. Really really. :) Both good series, and I wish there was more.

that was an amazing story. i loved your writing style it was as if you were telling it from like MOggets pov kinda. i LOVED IT! i really wish that you would write the story of Harry telling them that there were Charter Marks. this is amazing it combines 2 of my favorite books. now if only i could find one wiht Medalon in it. lol but anyways i LOVED! it!
keep up the awesome writing
Meg

This is good...I hope you'll add more chapters.

Your story is very funny and well written. If I were to rank it on a scale from 1-10 it would be a 7. Keep on writing! Please try to update soon.
-Lirestar

hope you do more chapters. it's good.

I can't really say much because it's only one chapter but I like it and I hope you continue it.

Do continue soon please. I like the way you write, it's really quite distinctive. Love the fact that you had Harry call the Disreputable Dog Padfoot. Amusing really.

This is your first review. It is from me. I know all. Good job disobeying Ranna. Say hi to the dog for me,