Nothing personal but I did not understand that at all

Okay. That one, I DID cry. I don't even LIKE Takeru. What's up?

I told you i was gonna read more of your I series one day and now i did, else i wouldn't be reviewing.

Nice story, onto the next chapter.

Oh btw, you never make sense, so why would the story? (ok it did .)

The part about Ken didn't make much sense.

Other than that, Kudos.

Beautiful . . .

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I think it's very poetic, and I can understand the chemo part. I dealt with it for 2 1/2 years.

Made sense to me! ;

that made total sense, then again, i'm not a stranger to ur stories or other angst writers...takeru was shown very well, yamato was perfect, daisuke was cool, ken was...well, ken was ken. i loved it! u're the best!

*sniffle sniffle* *breaks into uncontrollable sobbing* Mou! That was so *sniff* Sad! It was so well done! *sniff sniff sob!* Good job koi-chan!

What does -sempai mean? *all the Japanese peeps give her weird looks* What? I just figured out what -ko ment! Cut me some slack! Anyway, very well written, just like the others. Very heartbreaking too. Excellent.

Oh Gods, you're a good writer, this and the other two are so sad! I want you to write more of them, but do I really want to see the chidren and their fragile innocence shattered one by one as my eyes scoll down the page? I don't know, I don't think so, but I know that if there were others, I would do just that, and I would cry again and I would hate that it had come to such horror for them even as I loved your writing.

*sob*! My poor Taka-chan!

That made alot of sense. It was great! It was sweet (in some parts) but also very depressing. I liked it alot!

That made sense to me. But then, I am insane. So...