Aw this is a wonderful story so far! I do hope you continue write the next chapter!

I understood the house cat thing.
I also enjoyed Boisduval, it's totally a name Victor would use.

What a grand story! Please continue.

oh my goodness, this story is amazingly cute. The idea of a family of daughters, all with distinctly different personalities is so cute, especially Mary's random outbursts. Your stories are the best, and probably the only GOOD Corpse Bride Stories I've read. Not that the rest are BAD, but they all focus of Victor being unhappy with Victoria and he ends up running away back to Emily. That wasn't the whole point of Tim Burton's movie, and you captured Victor and Victoria's REAL love relationship perfectly. And even when they fight, they don't give up. Anyway, I'm rambling here, and your stories have inspired me to write my own. I can't wait for this ending.
Thank you so much!!
~Elizabeth

Yes, the cat parallel makes sense! I love this story so much, please update soon!

I love this. I love this the most out of all of your stories (which are all very good, by the way)! It's nice to see Victor being a father while still being extremely in character, because I've seen him way out of character too often. And I love his daughters by the way- but I love Mary the most, she's so cute and funny! And finally, I have to comment on chapter 8, when Victor acted as a human shield for Mary and Victoria. For some reason I really, really liked that and it stuck in my mind. I wish I could give some constructive critisism, but I have none! Keep writing, this story has to be written!

Oh please please PLEASE update! It's almost been a year since you updated and this story is as wonderful as all the other Victor/Victoria stories you've written. It makes me happy and secure in my happiness to read about them because they are so wonderful together and there are people who think he and Emily should have ended up together. However, you make it so clear when you write them that they are meant for each other with so many good arguing points. So if you could...please finish this cause really, it's just that good.

I absolutely adore this story! You have such great sense when it comes to capturing the unique details of basically everything! Please, you have to continue this! I love it!

Definantly keep up the good work! I think that the whole "cat" thing makes sense. I absolutely Love it! "Mary" is just such a perfect character! She is adorable! Definantly finish the story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanks!

I really enjoyed reading this story. The daughters are all wonderful OC characters, each with a distinct personality. I could see you eventually writing interesting stories about each one. The conflict between Victor and Victoria is very realistic and I am curious as to how it will be resolved.

I noticed that you haven't updated this since November. I know how busy life can get sometimes but I really hope that you eventually finish this!

By the way, I looked up "Boisduval." Very clever! :-)

No, the cat metaphor makes perfect sense. And 15 years of routine after a crazy, supernatural adventure would be enough to put even the most complacent man into a bout melancholyness. Can't wait to see more!

It's about time that Victor lived up to his name. :)

LOVED Finis and William's characterization. They always crack me up.

"Oh dear" indeed.

Wow. I love your characterization of Victor and Victoria... it's so realistic.