Oh, wow, this is good.
"Sparrow was a pirate, and he stank." Made me laugh out loud, because it is in all probability rather true. I loved the storyline and the idea, loved the way it was woven together, loved the writing style... It was fantastic and you should have a lot more reviews than you do, but for some reason nobody reviews Jack Sparrow slash (I should know, I have a JackBill slash story with something like 3 reviews *rolls eyes*). I like the interaction and how it seems so amazingly plausible and it character, and the last line is very poignant. I don't think Jack will ever know about the mark he made in return, because he seems to be a love 'em and leave 'em kind of chap, but it would be a very interesting continuation in they met again later and both remembered. Wonder if it was more than a way to escape the gallows? Well, either way, excellent story. Well done!

I'm glad that someone took notice of that line in Pirates 2! Because that sparked something with me, and I'm happy someone wrote about it! Nice job, very interesting view from Lord Cutler Beckett (or however his last name is spelled). "Yes, it's Lord now...actually..." mwahahaha! But nice job! Have a wonderful day!