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Reviews for: When a Hero Falls
TheGirlCanRock
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
argh!! so cute :D and it made me cry haha well done this is really good =)
sydneygirl90
2008-11-01 . chapter 1
I lvoe Ron/Luna. I'm sad Harry had to die to make it happen, though. But, this story was lovely, and everything was IC. At least, I think so. Very good work. :)
Ryuu Amethyst
2007-10-03 . chapter 1
This story is so beautiful in every way possible! *sniffs*
The way you wrote Ron and Luna and the interaction between them is perfect...

I almost cried reading the ending...


*faved*
whispere
2007-05-19 . chapter 1
Oh, that was just wonderful. It made tears spring into my eyes.
Sam
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
That was simply... beautiful. That's all I can say. It was beautiful.
Miss Amy Lynne
2007-03-31 . chapter 1
Oh, that was lovely!
Amyranth
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
*wipes tear gently away*

that got a tear in my eye, when luna said 'he's home'.
kiwi
2006-11-19 . chapter 1
This was cute and simple. I liked how they did'nt kiss or anything, it's become quite cliche. I did like that he was finally able to cry when she was around, it reminded me of Garden State, alot, which is a good thing because that movie is the bomb diggity. I thought it was very IC, good work!
Genna
2006-09-25 . chapter 1
Oh wow. That was so touching and perfect. It was so sad, it made me cry a bit.
Luckner
2006-08-03 . chapter 1
So beautiful and yet sad, I don't go in much for angst, but this story was wonderful. I liked the way you developed Ron's understanding of Luna; she's the type of person that it takes time to understand, but its worth the effort.
chunkeymonkey
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
Dahling! Its awesome--just like the first time I read it!
PuppyNoelle
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
o gosh i love this story! excellent work! i swear it almost made me cry! very well written and it captured their personalities perfectly :)
Samantha
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
I'm usually a Harry/Luna shipper but I think this story potrayed Luna/Ron so well. I couldn't see it any other way. I loved how you created Luna, she is so strange...eccentric and yet so wise...Usually I dislike the way people make Luna because they make her so...I don't know. But anyway, I think you captured her essence very well! I loved it :D It even brought tears to my eyes. Very heartwarming!
HanaDear
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
i liked it. =D
Insane Originality
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
Hmm, Yes Lovely Darling. Absolutly and Positively Perfect. I got the right feelings from all the characters but the feeling of the story ws , in my opinion, better than J.K. Rollings beacause personally I think Rolling is making her books depressing, when their realy is hope involved thier, you know? Anyway, Beautiful peice, I loved it.

-Prior C.
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