|Reviews for What they don't see|
| HolocronIacon421B 8/1/07 . chapter 1
Lemon it up a bit
| Tilly 8/13/06 . chapter 1
This is such a beautiful piece. I wish the series went more in depth with Optimus and Elita's relationship, but you hit a bullseye with this fic. Please continue writing!
| Prizm 7/31/06 . chapter 1
Yes, this was a great fic, I loved that last line.
| Lil' Monroe 7/30/06 . chapter 1
Who can flame at this? It has good grammer and spelling. Good job on making a Optimus and Elita story.
| Storm Blue Lightning Saix 7/30/06 . chapter 1
aw, poor Elita that was good please write more!