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  HolocronIacon421B 8/1/07 . chapter 1 Lemon it up a bit |
| Tilly 8/13/06 . chapter 1 This is such a beautiful piece. I wish the series went more in depth with Optimus and Elita's relationship, but you hit a bullseye with this fic. Please continue writing! |
| Prizm 7/31/06 . chapter 1 Yes, this was a great fic, I loved that last line. |
 Lil' Monroe 7/30/06 . chapter 1Who can flame at this? It has good grammer and spelling. Good job on making a Optimus and Elita story. |
| Storm Blue Lightning Saix 7/30/06 . chapter 1 aw, poor Elita that was good please write more! |
