well, im talking to you now so no point of asking questions here, great job

I have to say, this is one amazingly written fic and I look forward to the rest. Its not cluttered with too much detail and the tension and dialogue is constructed in away which conveys all the feelings and thoughts without having to completely explain them.
Hehe I love this and I hope u update soon :D
PhenX

He wont really die will he?

Great as I remember. I can't wait to beta read the next one. Half of me hopes Fugen gets dragged back to Konoha by Jiraiya, the other half hopes he fights off Jiraiya. Now what would be funny is if a scared out of her wits but determined to protect her little brother Temari brains Naruto over the head with her fan.

I AM IN TOTAL AWE.
Keep writing.

Poor Itachi...

This is a very intruging fiction uselly the, omg Itachi is a good guy thing turns into a flop. A very hard sell exspeccily as the story continues but at the moment I enjoy it update some time before I the world explodes.

intersting story man

umm... naruto finally talked lol!

wonderful as always. Keep it my friend

:) good luck for school

Great Chapter Jiraiya-sama ^^ Anyway all i have to say is that so far your story have become very intresting and i wonder what Jiraiya in the story will think when he see's the sword that'Fugen' has but anyway we shall leave that for the next chapter ne.. oh and take your time with it there is no need to hurry ^^ Ja Ne Jiraiya-sama *waves and vanishes into black smoke*

great story! sounds good! please continue writing!

Oh, Gaara vs Fugen, will Shukaku and Kyuubi make an appearance? And how will Jiraiya react to seeing the Raijin and other Konoha speciality jutsu from the scroll?

that was interesting. hinata goes with itachi...

peace