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| Winged One 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAw, I like that. (I'm also glad I'm not the only one who's thought up that particular water-torture) I specifically really like that last sentence; it really draws the piece together. |
| AlleluiaElizabeth 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOh cool! I just got to this fic via your author profile. I read your "Snow Kagura and the seven chibis" and thought "Hey, another kagura/kouga fan.^^" So I go to he profile and the first fic is see is ATLA. And, having read it, not just ATLA, but Zutara! ^^ Very cool. Aou tthis story in particular, I really liked it. It is a goo drabble/oneshot/vignette thing. lol And wow, the image of Katara having gone evil!waterbender on Azula... Dang. lol Oh and ppl making sign s to ward off evil as she passes. Thats funny to me. (Though after that... lol guess I can understand) I really hope Zuko recovers from the 2nd season finale and ends up ruling, like you have him here. Anyway, cute ficlet. Nice point at the end. :) |
| Hebi R. 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It seems more real than fics where Zuko is suddenly transformed into an abnormally sensitive man, or Katara suddenly needs a bid strong man to protect her, and the like. |
| Spleefmistress 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseNice! :D |
| cancertopia 2006-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Myn, great ficlet! This makes me want more, it's almost like having a little D/G in Avatar land, where I usually feel so alone, lol. Nicely done, I can't wait for more! |
| Nimechan 2006-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was beautiful! A short, yet powerful (is that the right word?) peice of art shown through words. I especially like the ending. I hope you write more works like this. =D |
| Katara24 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseis this all there is going to be to this one? i want more! |
| Kiwifish 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Very nice *is very tempted to quote Oliver Twist*- "Can I have some more, Please?" |
| SingleServing 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseVery well written! Hope to see some more Avatar fiction from you in the future. |