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Texas Dragon 2007-01-25 . chapter 1
If he wanted to die couldn't he have just killed his own damn self? it's strange but odly good.
Rebecca Skwalker 2006-12-20 . chapter 1
good but sad but you should update mind trap
Failing Mentality 2006-08-07 . chapter 1
(shivers) Down-right creepy. Not to be rude in comments, but it made me think along those lines.

Failing Mentality.
Nari Starfire 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
I would be overjoyed to be your beta for Mind Trap, if you will have me. I have been following the story since you first submitted it, practically, and I have reread it many times. Please send me an email at if you choose me as your beta, or even to just let me know that you will not choose me as your beta.

My name is Kelli, by the way.
Werewolf777 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
OMG! If you update mind trap...I think I will love you.
It was the third fanfiction I read, and its what got me addictied.
Anyway, I enjoyed this fic. It was well written.
Poor HArry! He never woke up again. I think he's dead, not a coma or anthing...
~MAX
parseltonge girl 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
wierd was that all or is their more to the story
trashcansrewl 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
great story...hope yuo update soon
Silver Tears 11 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
wow this was very good!! i loved this fic!!
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