R this is a great story the only problem is that there are several spelling errors in your story and I suggest you get an editor. Otherwise you are such a great author that you can make a book if you wanted to.

Its all nice and good and all and Kira being evil is ok to but the whole killing the guy whoever he was and his family went a bit to far its not just oc but oocc I can't see Kira no matter how evil hes become kill a faily and thier father never maby lock him up forever anf threten to kill his family if they say anything but not just shot them in clod blood well besides that its pretty good.

amazing story. i love the way you show the dark kira and all the way back in the first twenty chapters i was figuring on a mpd case. i like how you did the entire first story and now the split line is also great. will you give kira strike freedom or will he manage to reclaim his suit and redesign it to look better for his personality since it is a wonderful design that is better than anything else. i cant wait to see the changes that are now going to come from kira changing, also would it be to hard for him to go by kira yamato rather than Hibiki and if he removed his scars he could return as he was before. he could say that Hibiki was his twin brother and with his capture it wouldnt be to hard to say he died. while this would be a bit of a conspiracy, it would work better for them altogether not having to deal with revenge. also will kira save his children and sarah? also do his children with sarah have names because you always said daughter, girl, and ultimate from what i remember? update soon.

just curious...will you be updating this story again on 3/28/09 or has it been cancelled? i hope you will continue with this work, as I've been reading it since its start and find it highly entertaining. you truly have skill as a writer. i don't kno what has caused you to cease for now (hopefully nothing dreadful) but if you still have the desire in you to finish this story, i implore you to continue. i look forward to seeing the continuation of this epic fic.

this is one of the most amazing fics I've ever read!

I love your story. Please continue it.

Good story going on, keep updating and work on the dark sequel.

i don't think kira captured mean victory for orb. For they have not met ryu skills. For he is the one that taught kira his special skills. I don't think Neo can defeat it except Kira.

one more huh.

Great chapter, keep up the good work!

Finally an update. Pretty nice chapter, and kira certainly gave the enemy a far tougher time than expected. Anyway, hope to see the story advance further and hopefully, the next update will come sooner.

im kinda lost, was it kira who made his newborn son a ultimate coordinator? and also isn't only good in mechanic engineering not genetics but anyway...

I like your concept of the story, but its really moving a slow pace... i found many chapters to be very boring... but i read your other stories so im sure it will pick up...

hmm about the whole pregnant apart with lacus.. kira is a test tube baby... also lacus isn't even a first generation coordinator or even a second.. if im correct she is a 3rd meaning she can't have children... and same with kira i don't think he is able to have children either... i will look up into it. and also kira is not only the "ultimate coordinator" but he is also a "NewType" well if not NewType has NewType abilities... and another thing about Kira taken those pills.. the reason Rau and rey took pills were because they had telomeres which decrease there lifespan because they were aging rapidly.. so they took the pill to easy the pain.. and also kira is "first generation" i know this is your story but im just letting you know and also if kira and lacus could have children.. they would probably.. die because of kira genetic traits.. this is why many of kira brothers and sisters died because they weren't able to handle it.. only person to survive was canard pars... and even if the kids don't die.. you see the flaws that canard had... kira kids would have the same flaws... they would be incomplete and no where near superior to kira... but hey this is ur story like i said before just lettin u know some facts

So when will the next chapter release,.,?

interesting chapter, cant wait for an update.