Galby

B

This was just as better, had funnier parts...Well, gotta go!

Laterz!

Thank u so much for using the name Nathen and having his butt kicked. Why? I have my reasons => hee hee hee

peresonaly I think murtaug should "lonley"by ackon for the karaokie

Ps sorry about the spelling

Yeah yeah yeah, I'm reviewing my own story. This is only to find something out. Don't ask. Anyway, have fun reading!

You are so mean to end this story forever make it a triolgy please um ill give you cookies?
im begging you it was to awsome of a story to end!

i have one thing to say...
WRITE ANOTHER! THAT WAS BRILLIANT.
no criticism necessary.
D.C

strange ending
toodle-oo

Oh I'm so glad you re wrote it. I with-held my review before, because I consider no review a bad review. I definantly cosider this a better ending. I will be looking forward to more Eragon stories from you. ;)
peace out:)

YAY! I FINALLY got my cookies! woot woot! Party ova here oohey oohey, party ova there oohey oohey! And uh, I guess you're welcome for the flame...

i like this ending better. it was happier for the most oart

Well, that was a funny ending. I think it fit more with the funny mood of the story. You could've kept the sad ending with an explanation, but I liked this one better.

Yay. I'll admit that was a better ending and I like it very much. I did like the last ending, it was just kind of random and depressing. I'de love to see the oneshot and would love to hear more work from you.

~Snowlia

YAY! I like this ending alot better. Bittersweet, ya know? Sorry if you thought I flamed you earlier, I really didn't mean it that way. I was just sort of... angry. and sad. Sorry to offend!