I rally like this one, I hope you'll make more stories^^

I think your Leon/Seifer 'verse is turning out -really- good. Both seem wonderfully IC, and Leon actually reminds me of Squall (because in KH he irritated the crap out of me, being nothing at all like the FF8-Squall).

The first part mentioned brief instances of nostalgia and remembrance. *pouting* I wish I knew how you were going to involved the FF8 storyline, but I -suppose- I can wait.

I wonder, how old is Seifer? I don't remember the game ever saying...

Have I mentioned how much I love your writing? It's different, somehow, than most people's, though I couldn't say exactly how.