one word for you: awesome!

That was so sad, and yet so wonderfully written. It really showed the essence of their relationship, nice work. ^^

The first part was sweet and cute and oh so Romantic, you truely are a great writer. The second part was sad, but it did happen...:( Still you're a great writer! Keep up the great work!

I liked this variation of that scene very much. Clever interpretation, and very good detailing.

-Red Skye

-sniff-

Why do most of my reviews start with that?

Ah, well. Very well written.

Aw. So sad. And short. And sweet. I love those type of stories. Yay!
(I'm not angsty right now, which means I can read sad stories. And go on Myspace.)
I love Rin and Haru and Rin AND Haru (meaning RinxHaru in my imaginary language dialect thing). I like the last part teh best. So sad...

so sad and angsty (cries) i liekd it